Well written. .....................................
I'm the writer so i have got to write something, any I will try to post as many chapters that I can so please give a good review and any creative Ideas you may have. Thank you
this is good, ive read to chapter 200ish in mtl and its kinda like i'm in hollywood and IRAS, as its already chapter 900ish in MTL but my dao isnt firm enough to stand the dao of mtl, so imma currently re cultivating my foundation so that my inner demon no longer wreak havoc,
Anyway my point is, you love IRAS? then you would definitely love this.
Dropped. Inconsistent release.
PENTAGON's Hui won second place on Mnet's music battle show "BREAKERS."
The finale included the Top 4 participants: Hui, Penomeco, Seo Samuel, and Mia. Penomeco won 1st place on the show.
During the finale, Hui performed his self-composed song "For You," a track expressing that he will keep on going despite the hardships in life, because there are always people watching over him.
"BREAKERS" is a show where singer-songwriters battle by producing songs according to a theme or concept.
Congratulations, Hui!
An excellent novel for anyone who wants to read something worthwhile in this genre. The author really thinks a lot about the characters and the world they live in. Scenes are entertaining and well written. Keep up the good work!
it has a promising start, hope you continue it. Please update more chapters. Looking forward to what's next.
more more more more more more more more
Things were going great till author went down the Futanari road ... that's not my cup of tea ... I am dropping this as of now on chapter 175
A very detailed background of world and lores following them. All the important characters have a fullfilling back story written, the story is easy to read and understand and feel the emotions in it... A great story steady updates and best quality writing.....
Oops, almost forgot the tradition of Webnovel, my bad. Here's what I have been planning when I began writing this book.
Writing style: Well, I am trying my best to present the story in simple English while also providing decent immersion.
Characters: This is one part of the story I can say with my chest puffed up, they are realistic. Most of my efforts went into designing characters that are life-like.
World Background: This is set on Earth involving its numerous complexities. I assure you that any magical phenomenon set in the story will have a solid logic.
Grammar: Well, my language is almost perfect. Though it may not be on the level of standard publications since I barely spend about an hour of editing per chapter.
Updates: Well, this is something for the future. I am currently uploading 3 chapters per day, but don't know how long I could keep this up. Maybe if I go full-time writing, this would be easy. Let's leave it for the future.
Conclusion: Have a read and see for yourself. I haven't used any cliche till now, so hehe. Expect a good reading time
The synopsis sounds very promising! I know it only has one chapter so far but damn... I want more! That is a rare occurence in novel reading. Hope to see more in the future!
With the author's perception in the field of arms and ammunitions leads the story line earing reality and so the ideas of conflict and interest lead the readers to understand the syntax and climaxes ..maximizing the interest to read on...
So I read on... waiting for the next chapters.
The MC has as much personality as stale bread. The typical filial shtick with the annoying mentality of 'returning a droplet of kindness with a waterfall'. This MC has no individuality, nothing to distinguish him from the 100,000 other MCs with the exact same personality. If that wasn't enough the translation quality is terrible. The quality noticeably drops every 5 chapters. For instance, some words are directly translated into English without considering the context. This is why this novel calls cultivators as 'fairies'. Obviously rushed!Honestly, I have no clue how this rubbish was picked. The story is awful, character design is bland, and the translation quality is reminiscent of machine translation.