it's kinda annoying how the author talks like hes in the past but all so the future and he restates the same thing like five times. The book isn't bad it also isn't great.
Its not just one more fantasy story. Besides being very creative, its Funny, smart, gripping and entertaining! Just loved it! Highly recommend!
No book is perfect, and i am here to read so the book is nice and well written. After the first chapter the Author got better and better the Author also asks for help yet i have seen noone answer once. My suggestion in this review would be to add
more back story on the game, cause his Real Life has some aspects that you think a future would have.
I read the first two chapters of your novel and I liked the plot line. It's very interesting. Also, the dialogue flow between the characters is amazing! But it would be a clean and a clear read if you give some information about the situation and the setting but apart from that, its a worthy read! Keep up the good work!
So far everything is going pretty well, both sides (Nero, aka. Naoko and the King/other heroes) has been giving enough detail on whats happening.
Writing Quality- Although somethings get kinda repetitive, the quality is still pretty good, up to my standards, its alright.
Stability of Updates- The author updates this story quite often, I feel satisfied for this part so far.
Story Development- This story is more fast paced and if you don't like fast paced then I don't think you should read it; but for me I like it, fast paced stories are my thing.
Character Design- The author doesn't fail for designing his characters. So far, every time we have a new character arrive the author explains them in detail, doe sometimes I feel like he does get a bit lazy but I also get lazy in my writing so I really have no complains in this section.
World Background- Although the author focuses more on the character development and story/plot, the world background are explained little by little. It is not like some novels where they explain the whole world in one chapter. The author gives us details about the world in some chaps and not other while making things clear and understanding.
Overall, for my preferences, I give this novel 5/5 so far. I'm really liking how things are going so far. Every thing is going smoothly for me so far, I hope to see more great things in the future.
This is a book that offers the taste of REALISM as what we would expect in having a Monster(namely an Imp) as the Main Character in a fantasy world. The story, so far as what I've read, is about the MC's gradual development to an intelligent being, struggling to survive in an unfavorable environment. As he slowly learns the workings of the world, he is again and again faced with new questions and obstacles that he needs to address in order to improve himself and to demystify his purpose of existence.
I am done I read more than 200 chapters I can't take it anymore I mean sometimes I wonder who is the main character Su Bai or Chen Ruoxue I mean seriously she is getting everything she wants for free and he is just giving it is like a submissive dog I've seen enough
Clearly the Author has some bias towards other harem members.. *Nuwa* cough.. while other members only get mentioned by name and not having any lines. Xiao Wen was my favorite from the start and now she barely gets mentioned and just fades in the backgroudAlso author kinda bummed out the plot of the Liena's fate organization of the earth realm. They are trying to open the fate kingdom as their goal when it just suddenly opened when MC kidnap a girl and Fate king was like "kill him for me". meh
The synopsis was quite interesting. I love the author unique sense of writing. The storyline is also captivating. kudos to the author.????
Is this Yandere?
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Keep that momentum you can do it!!!Ganbatte kudasai!!!Fighting!!Hope there any Mangaka want to visual your light novel and soon become the best light novel like tensura