Allen_Augustine
I love this, so different, well-done Author.
Okay so let me just say—this whole mung bean jelly subplot is genuinely clever plotting. On the surface it's just a transmigration survival story, right? Girl gets eggs, girl raises chickens, girl sells stuff. But the way the author layers in the income strategy is actually really tight. First the eggs appear mysteriously, the kids believe it's a Bodhisattva blessing, and Lin Yue plays along because hey, belief sells. Then she pivots to mung bean jelly as a secondary product. It's not just random food content—she does actual market research, walks through the village, sees people suffering in the heat, spots the tea stall as proof of concept, and decides to unlock the recipe. That's a character who thinks ahead. The subplot with Xiao Lian is also doing heavy lifting here. You'd think it's just neighborly fluff, but no—Lin Yue brings her the liangfen, and suddenly we get a kitchen with proper seasonings. Salt, sugar, soy sauce, vinegar. This is how you set up a cooking business without it feeling like magic. The author is building a supply chain like a sane person instead of just hand-waving it away. And Dogdan's tofu backstory? That's world-building disguised as casual conversation. We learn about recipe monopolies, family secrets, class differences in food access—all through two kids reminiscing. That's efficient plotting right there.
Really enjoyed this book ...
I love this book
Good story with twist and plot. Hope the author will finish the story of Lydia Hayden & Cornellious Powers.. ...
Fairy baby, I love this book
There's a few errors that need to be corrected but that aside, this was a good read. All the twists and turns made it all worthwhile. Good job author.
Please update
138 chapters 1-15-23
This should definitely be published in paper back
You did very well, Im definitely going to read the next book! Good job!
please update
