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Heyo! Your boy Cat King here with a casual review. I know there have been a lot of sign up novels lately but I for some unknowable reason really like this one. Got my adrenaline pumping while reading and all in all had a good time but maybe it’s the delirious haze I have at 3 A.M right now that blinds me to all flaws but still. Anyway I recommend you all to read it or give it a chance at least.... really in the morning when Iwake up once again I might delete this review but for now I had good time and I hope you will have a good time reading this novel or otherwise.
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I haven't read it yet and I'm only giving a review to ask the author what the tags are... hi author I hope you can answer my question... I'm only giving a review this long due to the word lower limit
Can someone give me a raw
I can't find it
yeah I did what you said right now and now review time
this novel is really great for beginners and for people that read alot but to criticize to much because some people have said it's a bunch of cliches but if you add different cliches together you might just a really good book like how right now nova has a mysterious family and all he knows is he's related to the first king and he wants to get stronger to help reishnied (sorry if i got it wrong i did it off memory ) and help himself with other things don't know yet but we're going to see
D fun her yh he is going to be free of charge it to the SIM cards and a bikini wax and I will be there at that should have been a bikini top of the phone and it k it k I go to bed so that should be fine I will
I'll br honest, I haven't read all that much. but I've read enough that I'm confused on the very basis of the story. and its also probably not a good sign when the names of the magic change in the literal synopsis. its definitely Interesting, the character from what I've seen is fine and the world is fairly fleshed out. but its not something g id be willing to sink more time into.
Please vote for this Novel
I don't think that your this funny. Hahaa.. I feel the vibe of someone from you bro...
And you Tales if Existence was also good.
I advice a little improvement from the grammars.. then it would be a perfect masterpiece!
Your concept piqued my interest! It's hard writing detective stories so I hope you keep it up!
The plot is like any other investigation novels but it's clearly different since the overall vibe of the MC is very different compared to them. I mean, I can't review anything more since there was just one chapter but I hope you continue venturing in this genre :))
Something to watch out for is your lack of article usage. Sometimes it gets confusing which was which if you don't use articles. Also, some of your verbs would be better if you left them on present perfect tenses since it will sound better than present tense, or just use infinitives... or so that's what I think after seeing the whole picture of the first chapter. We authors have a lot of things to improve on phew~!
All I know is that this book is going places! Do continue it since I want to read more of these ^ ^
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
