The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him.... His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)
Having read the previous books one is in best position to appreciate the sequential unfolding of the plots and storyline The Author of this Sequence has done a great brain job It's not easy to capture and maintain readers' interest Thank you for that Although it's tiring to figure out somethings before putting it in writing yet l want to solicit for more Chapters per release So far The Story is
Interesting idea, I like how the world is shaping up. If you start posting daily with good grammar then this could be popular. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Has this been dropped been loving everything so far but noticed no new chapters where coming out anymore not sure if I want to use coin for more chapter if novels future is uncertain
I haven't even read yet that title alone makes it a 5 star I doubt it will change even after I read the book
I saw this in other sites and for me who occasionally likes things lite, this novel is good enough. Has plenty of action, drama, romance
I know, the shameless review from the author herself.
I just wanted to say that if the story are a bit confusing just tell me so that I can make it more understandable. Special thanks to all those who support the story, as an bonus I will try to write longer chapters.
Let’s see how Gabriel will cope with his journey.
One of the best action story that cuts across the world. This is the best clandestine operation stories. You better get your copy and read soon.
Enjoy
That's so amazing to be honest, at first I tought it would just be a random harem book, but it was not just another one of these. The story is interesting, and it got some laughs from me, hope the author doesn't drop...
Mc is just a tool man. The witches around don't seem to care much about him other than the power he can give them and just treat him like a servant. Always just demanding things from him and ordering him around like an errand boy. He seems fine with that because he gets to be with two beautiful witches. Nothing really has happened so far into the story though. The system is just a status screen until now, I guess. Title says inheritor of magic, but I don't even know what he actually inherited. Maybe the status screen is the magic he inherited?
This is a gem; the author has done a good job presenting this story to us, giving us a smooth reading experience.
Clarifying that, the story is easy to digest, making for a clear and concise reading experience that doesn't leave you scratching your head out of frustration like some other stories do.
There are a plethora of characters, diverse and leaving a lot of room for favorites to be picked.
It's a setting I don't see explored much with stories on this site, so its refreshing to see--give this one a read.
Haha I continue my claim of Firsts!
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