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Typical Japnese shy boy that have me questioning if he's actually gay. If you are into anime manga with high-school drama, cliché stuff about aggressive girl courting shy main boy then this is for you, I just grown out of this phase, it now becomes predictable and boring. No hate on the author, their writing quality is pretty good, just the genre that gutted my review.
It’s slow but the story gets very interesting as the story goes on. Especially when they get super natural powers and try to kill each other. ☠️
soooooo many thing happening when i think that i got it something new happen its great novel i like reading it hope you finch the novel the mc jest got his 15 birthday he got poison and cant move some monster attack from some portal jest as people start to panic another portal opens the mc halo save him but a monster that can destroy the country jest pop up one more thing the mc sent to his mined*brain and his emotion have personalty and can control him one more thing they are strong as gods more thing happen that happen
For those that do not know, this's a Korean novel. the author name is 성진저 it's translated by Asian Hobbyist and has 185 chapter with the story ending at 226 chap. you can find it with a little bit of search. Also the one who post this novel here, needs to change it to translated not original. i don't know if you know what those words means. but their are laws that you don't break. if you do this in college, you will get kick out of college
One of the best virtual reality novel.???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: The constant multiple scene changes within a single chapter are confusing (speaking of POV's). I don't understand the world at all. I can see the intention and potential of the plot and characters, but also see a lack of depth and follow through on those. Positive Feedback: Good character and story ideas. Also, Seems like you are keeping to the post rate you promised. Only spotted one grammar error.Personal Feedback: Good ideas with a ad execution, my apologies, but I will not be continuing this novel. I hope you continue for those who enjoy your book, I just can't enjoy a book that seems like the author was just trying to rush all their ideas (not rush through the story...the story is actually quite slow... It just feels like the story making process was rushed)
I love this story!!! When I was trying to find some BL Light Novel to read, and I come across this... I thought that the cover art was beautiful so I check it out, but somehow I ended up reading it and it was... GREAT!!!I don't see much BL scenes in it but the plot was wonderful! I love it!!!
This book have a similar vibe to one of my more enjoyable reads called The Romance of Dragons and Snakes. The way the fights and power progression described have a certain realistic feel to it. Although the story might be confusing at first but it gets much much better when the mc have a purpose, a goal to achieve.
Anyone who have tried the previous version is sure to love this one As for new readers Try it ,you're sure to love itWell thought-out (this time)Mc has awesome personality Characters are interesting World background:- based on successful onesStory development- as much as serious as it is humorousFrankly it's real good And I would not need to convince anyone who ever gives it a chance ?
Hey there! It's me, a random sugar beet that is in no way related to the author or anything. (ʘ ꒳ ʘ✿)This story is about a goddess having the fun of her life trolling our mc. Why? Not telling!Anyway, feel free to leave me any comments or questions - this is for you in the first place.(◡‿◡✿)
Writing quality alrightStory Development is underdevelopedCharacter Design is undersignedUpdating stability is meh considering this novel won't have a chance for continuationWorld Background is average. Nothing special about it. Like every other cultivation world Background there is.