Keep it up. ... the story is going great and i hope that you keep writing at this pace.... .Ig you want it as a long term story as per you mentioned. . don't worry I will give you my power stones.
School is really stressful takes me time to calm down and write a chapter, please bear with me guys.New chapters are coming prepare for more drama, comedy and a little bit of sci fi
Naise Story. You can add many conflict and many solution. Its very good for me as a newbie. I everything make a some novel... But not good yet Like your exactly. I m really thanks for you because it is give some inspiration to make novel be a good novel.
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That Pea soup fog got me good! The story is very fascinating, and I really love how detailed the announcements are in the chapters! Although I am still at the first few parts of the story, I can tell that this is going to progress as awesome as the book cover of your novel! I cannot wait to read more about this~
This is such a beautiful story ! My heart pounded , my tears fell . I was in agony and pain and in between , i was so happy and overjoyed. thank you for this beautiful experience
Grammar and syntax ain't the author's strong point. "Grammar!?! We don' need no steenkin' Grammar!!!" Ach Ja, I already forget how the Protagonist took his one-man freak-show onto the like road. He sita in a cave and meditates. He's got a system that seems to give him precious little at a to go on. Finally, towards dusk he decides he needs water and food. Water—maybe, Since his "mental powers" seem to be rising fairly rapidly, I'd put off any determined search for food for two or three days. Then he gives a wold a psychic hot-foot. Why not try to psychically MAKE FRIENDS with the wolf—saving the psychic burn for "Plan B"? Then we find that the Protagonist is Anti-Hunting…though THANKFULLY—NOT Vegan! Not worth trying to follow...
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I don’t like support………………………………………………Is she still playing support?
well, there are a few grammer mistakes. As for the world background, it's still unknown, so I only gave it a 4/5. This is actually a really good piece of writing and I'm hoping for it's continuation! Take my powerstone!
lookin forward to it.............................