One of the excellent stories! Please continue! No update for long time! Hope the writer is doing ok without covid! May I ask Webnovel to update about the story or writter! Thank you!
Was a great novel until all the usual Nationalism that so many Chinese novels seem to suffer from comes in. MC only seems to care about people from his country, but Americans? Nah they’re all evil people who “bully people everyday and talk about righteousness and benevolence.”
This is my Review of the Story......It's a good read for Beginners who are okay with the Tags and description given in the chapter and don't think that deeply about certain things...Writing Quality: 2 star ★★There are mistakes in grammar, wording, phrases and such but not that difficult to understand..Story Development: 3 star★★★Pacing is very slow but it's alright because the ending of the story is just apart a small mistery of MC's origin, other than that he just have to take some more girls and powers..Character Design: 2 star ⭐ ⭐ At the start it was going okay but at later it turned out to be bad especially MC(?) I don't like MC's personality that much in most cases..Updating stability: 5 star★★★★★Author is very good at this ?.World Background: 2 star★★As of now (chapter 315+ something) the details of the world are not that good needs more work on it like places, things and such.......I'm just here for the plot, some powers and artifacts other than that... .Maybe a Spoiler for some people so... :....MC's personality turned out to be worst in later chapters, well depends on the people reading that, but (for me) his personality turned out to be sh* very bad at a certain chapter and him being passive against his girl is a totally different thing that is even more of a let down but I'm still reading this cause of plot, powers and artifact settings.....Still it's a good read for Beginners. ?
The SIMP mc and the bullying running gag (not funny Btw) have ruined this web novel who had a lot of potential. smh
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Definitely a good book heading places!! Love the book, love where it's going, although the cover is a bit misleading (because its a girl) but that's no problem, considering that it still captivates the reader, no matter what they thought they were walking in to.
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I gotta say this really surprised me. I just wanted to lose some time but I got really hooked and finished 100+chap in one day. I’ve been spending all 3 power stones every day ever since. I really recommend you give this one a try. Cute, funny, adorable romance, interactions.
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If you stop writing this novel, I'll come and find you and torture you till you start writing again, do you hear me? lol, just kidding, the story is good and I like it, don't drop it.
A great sports novel that mixes system elements with realism. The main character isn't the only person you find yourself rooting for. the side characters are all likeable and multidimensional. There isn't people trying to suppress the main character for no reason like in a lot of system novels(yet). The author introduces unique problems to challenge the MC while still making him strong. Only downside about the novel is that chapters aren't released very fast.
Amazing start, I like the Title and female lead name a lot. Beautifully written the starting chapters ...️...️