Perty good. His other book was good to. Author dropped both of em tho. Ig it's still worth checking out tho. Even though this one cuts off right as it was getting good.
My friend told me about this story. I thought it sounded interesting so I tried it. I got hooked instantly. Personally, I find the storytelling absolutely amazing. I believe that this is an amazing story. The MC is a devil. A little ruthless by human standards but he's not a coldblooded character who kills for no reason.Overall, I'm glad this is the first book I found in this place. Keep it up.
Stupid system in cultivation with arrogant MC. These types of novels are literally EVERYWHERE. Can you please put these types of novels in trial reading so we can choose NOT to read these? THANK YOU!
Stories about going into a game and conquering it are near and dear to my heart. It's why I thoroughly enjoyed the first few chapters of this novel. And I can't wait to keep reading more. I just paused to write this review.
The writing is great with very, very few grammatical issues that don't break the flow of what's written down.
The world inside the game is interesting and--just by the number of races and job classes--will no doubt contain plenty of fun characters to meet.
Al's a decent character you'll want to follow because you want him to succeed. He's had a tragic thing happen to him and you feel like rooting for him to do well in the game. Obviously, SARS is my favorite character in this story. An AI with a 'tude' that really adds a freshness to the whole thing.
I enjoy the story so far. Looking forward to more!
The story is really confusing at the start.
The like many game type system it all so suffers from unbalance and not really fair.
Annoying stupid Mc like always.
So far it is a great novel and very promising, I really like how the character is going, I hope that the author continues and has more chapters or else ... !!!! I do not care about the consequences, I am crazy hahaha hahaha hahaha! !!!
Great read with a since of dark humor. The novel is based off of some d&d campaigns so if there are any fans of the game I recommend strongly for you to pick it up and give it a read.
Really not bad however many improvements can be made and this novel can be fleshed out.
Quality of writing is normal, nothing really stands out good or bad. Actually accurate English finally thank god.
Story progresses too fast in the beginning. The dialogue kinda sounds weird and what they say would usually not be said in a real conversation. Author jumps really quick in certain times and it's like "Isn't this too early to be happening in the story?" Can be worked on but still readable.
I love what you've done with the characters and you have really fleshed them out. It's easy to visualize the characters and their attitudes and behaviour.
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A disappointing and underwhelming read, made worse by the injection of slang hero names being thrown everywhere. Great if you can remember the new names of heroes, terrible if you get confused.
A história e incrível, o tipo de leitura que e viciante, simplesmente sensacional, os personagens são bem estáveis, e coerentes, porém quero ver personagens de outras etnias e o autor pode usar pontos positivos de outros impérios, e desenvolver mais o resto do mundo, mas acredito que isso acontecerá com o tempo. Obra incrível simples assim.