5 stars cos why not?
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good concept, good idea, it's just that the author doesn't have much experience in writing quite obviously, but no matter I will keep suporting author, so I hope he improves
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The twist and turns in this is phenomenal. Very well written with captivating characters. Not to mention, a compelling storyline. Well done!
I trust to see the outcome but before that, I want to recommend this book to you. The writer has done great work and if you are a fan of supernatural creatures or horror, you will enjoy reading this book...
Awesome bro. This story match someone's real life incidents.
Early review, neat concept and has some good protential. I will re-review later when there are 50 chapters.
There are frequent grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, however that isn't the worst part. After chapter 133 or so it drastically changes the story. Instead of fang Chen we get Jian. instead of the martial spirits cultivation system, we get the usual core formation and nascent soul cultivation system. It's like the author accidentally switched up projects and pasted the wrong book.
Just stopping here to give the classic 5 stars that every author gives!This is my first novel about cultivation, video games and systems, but I've had in mind for a long time the idea of this novel and the concepts and mechanics that I'm applying, so you can be sure to read something consistent! Besides, that's all I want to say, enjoy the reading.Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions.
Are you still writing chapters or did you stop
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