BrB ...System ... Er... get... -3 Chapt... per Day !!!!!...
Reader: NNNNOOOO!!!!
I really found a gem this time!
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Overall good read. I enjoyed the novel so far and i'm currently looking forward for the future. I'll definitely be keeping my eyes on this one.
But there is a word count. so yeahh...
A real romanceless romance that really resembles the typical low key sign in novels despite there being no signing in. Our protagonist gets assaulted by some generic demoness sect leader character.
Since this is a Chinese novel he isn't mentally scarred or traumatised but instead just brushes it off while the sect leader apparently has some mixed feelings about this. This is weirdly messed up morally but fine, let's move on.
Generic protagonist, generic cultivation system/world, generic characters and generic luck based cheat. While this novel does make me yawn unfortunately I've read more chapters of worse. This is essentially a spiritual successor to sign in novels but with a poorly thought out and currently non existent romance narrative to push the story.
The part of this novel that resembles the low key sign in novels is mundane but I can kinda force myself to read it, it's not bad. The relationship with the sect master however is just tedious. I don't care for the morality of the characters have and the fact that the protagonist has no animosity or any kind of feeling in particular (besides fear) towards the sect master is just strange.
Somewhat generic part sign in part detached romance with some translation errors (awkward and hard to understand wording). I do like the laid back, chill vibes of this novel though so although I've criticised this a lot, I don't hate it, I'm actually fairly biased towards it but I'm also a bit confounded. 2/5.
Everything is in order. Updating stability is also good. In short, Amazing!
5 stars.
My impression for now is very good. This book is a refreshing and original take on the martial arts genre. I really like the sense of realism I get fromthe plot. I like how the main character focuses on increasing his odds of surviving and doesn't necessarily chose the path expected from a main character. The pace so far is very adequate with no unecessary delays and the story progresses quite rapidly to the cultivation world without seeming rushed.
I hope to see more of Formation crafting next !
I will just say it..
I will post this just to warn any inncoent readers
This novel contains at least three case of ntr so drop it if you don't want the sadness
The novel is fantastic, but the translation sucks.
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My kind of humor and an interesting story. If you can handle minor grammar issues (there/their, your/you’re, lack of commas, ’a lot’ being one word instead of two…) then it is an amazing book worth reading.
So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters.
The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a negative just an observation)
It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now"
If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.
Waiting!!!!!!!!!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
It seems a to be a nice story, with a good world and interessting characters. The backstory of the concubine is tragic and the reborn version is instantly likeable. But that the backstory is partially unknown gives the story tension, that is needed.
The characters around him are also likeable, hopefully we see them develope. The adding of new characters is a bit fast, but it is okay, if it didn't continue with the pace it is going. It would be to many characters to keep track of.
The englisch is sometimes a bit iffy, but it is mostly tolerable.
Review for a read till chapter 3.
The style of writing is not really unique, childish perhaps. No real way around it besides constant writing. The review is more for aspects outside of Grammer. I hope youll stick to writing and deliver quality works in the future.
The initial chapters bored me, something a Prologue should strive to be the opposite. The story was spread too wide, many days flying by with not much going on. Its best to start off the prologue with something exciting, thrilling, something to make the readers look forward to the next chapter. The nightmare is interesting but nothing urgent or thought provoking is happening.
Character actions are simply written for the sake of it. Karma goes to school, does this, does that. There is no personality. I want to know who I am following in the story. There is a difference between 'Karma ate dinner and went to bed' vs 'Karma begrudgingly shoved a spoonful of spinach into his mouth. He swallowed it whole, an action that almost choked him to death. The taste was never pleasant. He had once blamed his mother for the taste. After many attempts of his own cooking, there was no saving it. The plant was simply never made to be eaten.'. There is a lot more personality in the latter.