Lalala, best story ever. Lalala, especially the translator, so quirky and witty.
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You are hurting the livelihood of the original translators who translated this novel by releasing this on this platform, I understand that you want to share this novel with other readers but this is not the best way to do that
I normally read and enjoy martial arts novels, immortal cultivation and all that, but sometimes it is nice to have a break. IRAS is a perfect example of what to read when you need such a break. The story may have quite a linear development, and it is often easy to predict what will happen, but the face-smacking is still as enjoyable as ever. This is by far my favourite non-cultivation focused novel by far.
I tried to give this a shot, really did. 140 Chapters in and finally small things have begun to change. Over an issue that could have been solved 120 chapters ago. If your going to do magical realism and focus on family issues at least make them somewhat realistic.
The writing quality and story devolpment are hard to follow. There really isnt much going on. And the scenes make you just stare and think, what? The character design is all over the place. One minute someone is a 10/10 all powerful then acts like a 1/10 in the next scene just to keep the unrealistic rolling plot going.
The book does have good updates though. But even for those like myself who enjoy a bit of constant face slapping, this one was a stretch.
Good I think I don't know what comment really
Alternate Beast times blah blah face slapping always ends up turning stupid…. But I like the cool house so I’ll give it a chance let’s hope it gets better.
I really love all your book i am a big fan of all your novels ,you are doing a good job well done.keep giving us great content .
I keep looking forward to new episodes
Early-ish review but going great so far. Grammar and spelling are perfect, and the story is engaging. Protagonist is on the weak to strong/neet to chad path and can't wait to see his growth, as well as his harem...
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All in all, if you haven't read this yet, you're really missing out on the work of a professional author with tremendous talent and potential.
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Hey, not a bad tale! From the first chapter to the last chapter it's clear you're getting much, much better! I think to make it flow smoother you just need to improve your grammar and sentence variation.
Other than that, keep writing everyday, and learn from the best authors you can find. Try and spot the differences between their work, and your own, and bridge the gap, bro.
Keep it up~~~