Just finish reading this novel. I say, its good for me to read and I completely enjoy the progress.. But the bad thing is the author is too hasty to leveling up the MC.. Untill the end there's no romance, no wife no friends (just fox and rabbit pet), even with his own original family the mc is cold but not as bad as "fang yuan of reverend insanity". And the ending? Just one thing, I Am Angry!! Fck u author!! The mc is just about to die and in the end supreme expert just fishing him up and done.. The story end.. (My english is bad, so ignore it)
I am the author and after writing for more than 400 chaps, I would like to inform that if you are here for a mc who is super smart, smart with relationship, and is practical then this story is not for you; along with slow paced. The MC is dense and slowly develops character, and even if he has lived for 5000 years, he still is a simple guy, who has less EQ. The story is very slow paced, but if you are willing to read it I can tell you that you will definitely feel some change within.
This story is very interesting that I want to read more of it. So I was wondering when is the next chapter of this story going to be updated.
It seems alright, however the synnopsis was confusing, grammar mistakes, the characters don't feel at all real or unique and I don't really get the spark in reading where I expect something from it. A good attempt however and I wish you well in writing.
The story is awesome good character development and the way the stkry went is fantastic however the story begins to go down once Trahexia is killed he went to shield hero and was nerfed to the point its not even funny alot of plot holes as well he went from heavenly dragon king to nerfed weak pretty mich low class devil power in the shield hero regardless of his power being locked he should still be able to steam roll through everything but the power levels r so off to make a plot
Crap novel. Firstly it is hard to read it. I have to pretty much fix every sentence in my mind for the story to make sense. Secondly, there are lots of stupid things happening in the story, for example mc sees some girl and falls in love with her straight away even though she is just nobody. Also, she is raped so mc marries some nobody abused rape victim?? Yeah very fun for us readers. I don't read stories for such sh*t!
The sino**is is useless... I don't know what the story look like, but i hope it's gonna be well. And, why i think i never see this novel on the votes place?
yes, yes, yes. I want to keep reading this book until it's completed. Did Nelly just cheat on her sister with no remorse? and Leo? All these are too much for Ellie to take in. I want too see what the future have in store for them.
Can't wait to start reading
Oh, damn. This is a very interesting book. Worth the read. It's highly recommended....
Great read!
I need to talk about this moment when Tao Nanfeng breaks that boulder. The text describes it like this: 'Each swing had looked effortless—almost weightless—until the moment of impact, when it struck with the force of thunder. Lightning fast. Heavy as a thousand catties.' And then she just pushes the broken pieces aside like they're nothing. The reaction from the other characters is everything. Wei Min's 'knees grew weak' when she looks at him. The others are calling her a 'powerhouse' and saying 'if she entered weightlifting, she'd be a world champion!' It's this moment where everyone's perception of her completely shatters. She's been this quiet girl who works alongside them, and now they're realizing she's got superhuman strength. But what really got me is the emotional journey here. Tao Nanfeng was scared at first—'she feared people would treat her like a monster'—but then nobody does. Xiang Bei just says 'you're strong. The road crew is the perfect place for you.' The others just feel 'relieved. Thank goodness we have you, Tao Nanfeng.' It's this really touching moment of acceptance. She doesn't have to hide anymore. And then there's the friendship between her and Xiao Aiyun. When Xiao Aiyun sees Tao Nanfeng about to break the rock, she's 'face alight with smug satisfaction' and tells Wei Min to move aside. She's clearly proud of her friend. The emotional beat where the youth are all fired up after seeing her strength—'the more they talked, the more fired-up they became, working with even greater vigor'—that's such a nice moment of collective motivation. It's not just about the construction anymore, it's about believing in their leader. And then the sabotage hits and all that joy gets crushed along with the bricks. Oof. That emotional whiplash is brutal.