Love Reading it, Writing is good, character development is also good, what was happening in the world was relevant but not too much that the MC was overshadowed by it the designs looked cool (Might snag one XD)
it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.
Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?Is this a huge harem?
You mother****er author.................. Why not write more for free........................ I want to kill you!!!............................
Although the the system isnt too pervertedly possessing type but the way the beasts talk , think , This Is just ridiculously stupid ?
Thanks for the novel ?????????☺????☺?????????????☺?????????????☺???????????????????
The story was great. It moved at a steady pace and the characters were cool. Unfortunately the author has stopped updating, so no matter how good it is, it's rather useless if the story isn't being updated.
It's ok,no,no, Noyes to get a new one and it was a pleasure meeting you and your family are doing well and that you are not about that time and I will ? just got home from work and I will be there.
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automatic 1 star just for seeing MC named Thomson. i just tried reading another 2 trial reads with westernized names, just to find out that they are stolen, gutted, bastardized and rewritten versions of the novels from faloo. as such i wont even bother to search raw name for this novel, cause just having westernization is enough suspicion for me that i can expect same things in this novel also...
I'm not going to lie this is a pretty new novel so I don't know how could it's going to get, it even might get worse. but at the moment it's Peak!