I absolutely loved this story. I could not stop reading it. It was funny and relaxing.
after reading the title i know this is just garbage it is ok to read if you ignore common sense (logic) and savage society watching 8 years old survive in the forrest.this is the same as other not make sense novels.
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The author knows how to make his storytelling interesting! I really like reincarnation to the past novels and this story has a potential to compete with the top ranking novels in the future if given the time. Congrats in advance author!Hope you will make review on my work called Lumia: Other World.
150 chapters and only 6 days have passed this is too slow and unrealistic.. there´s too many little details that the more you read the more you realize that there´s actually nothing happening, also the author gives little foreshadows that are extremely annoying.
Ok this is obviously a generic mediocre stuff from the get go, not even the kind that's actually interesting at the start and poorly written later. Well, it's actually a good thing because I can drop this without a second thought now.
I decided to write my first review what had all what I think about this novel.- First of all.... ITS TOOOO SLOW PACED, reminds me about cultivation chat group where basically evry fkng day was mentioned. - Second of all is that MC loves to do some kind of useless ****. Like well... Talk with trash wich takes him like 10 chapters or more. Or do something really stupid and inconsistent. - Third is again. MAGIC. How the hell pple lvl up in there? MC basically SOLO cleans whole dungeon and gets most XP posible BUT THERE ARE PLAYERS WITH LVLS HIGHER THAT HIS?! Like wtf? - Forth is what I mentioned above and more is INFO DUMPS, just one over another. Srsly! I can basically skip entire chapters cause well... Battle wich is not even interesting. - Fifth is magic PVP masters. Game is basically VRMMO so you have to have ability to move in one way or another. Why the hell there are so much combat masters? Like srsly one over another. With their magic lvl ups.- Sixth is just story is getting boring. Like wtf? He does one thing like for 4 chapters with tons of tons of info. Also the SHOW BUT NOT TELL makes me rage. He says WOW SO NICE ITEM.... to get in description in like tons of chapters. - Seventh is that the writes said us that MC is basically 1000y.o cultivator so he has to be like so fkng OP beating evryone easily. But he has to tryhard as it looks like. - Eight is that how the game works.... Giving and boss with like milion HP? For what goddamn reason? Just to waste another 5 chapters with infodumps all over the places. - Ninth is that MC loves to waste time on useless ****. He can take a ploblem just for no reason for himself and later give excuse "I wanted to see how to pvp ingame". He just makes stuff difficult for himself for no apparent reason. Sometimes he looks like clever guy.... But a lot of times he does inconsistent ****.- Tenth is that Enemies that MC meets are over his lvl alwase and the most hatefull are crits. Like why dont you makes One shot abilities? No lets drag the battle for hrs. Why class asassin even exists? Also some class has just insane lvl of difficulty. Like combat master, where somehow you have to make your own skills wich MAGICALLY game can interpret. I'LL. MIGHT ADD MORE LATER. THE PROGRAM IS LAGGING. NICE OPTIMIZATION LOL.
Find it Hella sus that both Crimson_Ink and Lazy_Leon send (multiple) magic castles to DurcalAka AND to each others novels (btw, durcalaka has a very "similar" writing style as Crimson_Ink, same with LMHnovels and Lazy_Leon) and both of them then proceed to give this story a review and each others story a review too, and both of them stop writing anything at exactly 6 months ago at the same time, and then LMHnovels goes offline one month later (so 5 months ago), I'm 99% sure that Crimson_Ink, LMHnovels and DurcalAka, are all the same person. This Person, keeps starting new stories (and new accounts, faking reviews and gifts) and dropping them midway to make quick bucks before dropping them, by making a rushed ending in 1 chapter. (Not only that, but under these peoples novels, most of the reviews are HIM. What a manipulative b@$t@rd, I don’t like this person at all.
Hey Thank you for writing a sequel I was desperately waiting for it.
One of the best books I’ve read! This is my fourth time reading this book!!
I keep coming back to the animal imagery in this chapter and I think it's doing a LOT of thematic work. Shen Lingxi is repeatedly called a 'little rabbit'—spineless, clingy, sickly, easy to toss aside by the ears. But rabbits are also survivors. They reproduce fast. They're prey animals that somehow persist. And Fu Jinglan? He's a snake. Literally—his tattoo is two red and black snakes coiled at his side, and the narrator specifically notes the scar beneath it would be 'unbearable to look at.' The snake is a classic symbol of danger, temptation, but also healing (the caduceus). He's the predator and the protector, and Shen Lingxi is walking right into his territory. Then there's the longevity lock—'A Century of Longevity and Blessings' engraved on gold with jadeite bells. It's a traditional Chinese baby blessing, the kind you give to a newborn. Fu Jinglan has it. He's touching it when she walks in. And she assumes it's from a first love, but the text implies it might actually be FOR her, or for a child they might have. The irony of her saying she doesn't want a 'demon child' with him while he's literally holding a symbol of wishing for a child with her is almost painful. And the silver dollar plants—those delicate, thin-as-wings seedpods he brought her—scattered and wilted on the floor after he leaves. Everything about this chapter is about the tension between what these two want and what they're willing to admit. The rabbit wants freedom. The snake wants to keep her. The lock promises longevity. And none of them are getting exactly what they asked for.
This book kept me going! It was quick and to the point! Not a lot of useless parts! Loved it!