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It's very good. If you're looking for a neutral evil protagonist that faces struggles and uses his advantages to his utmost ability then look no further.
A quick disclaimer-
Author decided it was necessary to explore the mc's past life and see the changes that made him truly evil. If this was around ten or so chapters it would be bearable.
But unfortunately this lasts for more than the first 30 chapters. So you will be tempted to drop (as it is very poisonous). But at chapter 41 is when the mc reincarnated for the final time. Everything from here forward is pure evil mc. No poison, no anti-hero gimmicks.
This novel is worth reading after chapter 40. In my opinion the novel doesn't truly begin until his final life begins.
i don't even read it but alpha male no Harem with this only u get 5 star
Overall it is readable, sadly there are many inconsistencies. Like it was established that Xuan(The MC) wasn't actually that much stronger than the second ranked player and rather always one because he fought with his brain and had ample preparations, yet somehow he completely trusts in a new technique and has no backup plan almost getting himself killed by someone with a fraction of his experience. Then there is the fact that such an experienced, smart individual despite knowing the location of a certain item ahead of time never found it in his previous account purely because it didn't have an aura, despite already knowing about upgradeable artifacts as his main weapon was one, he had zero reason not to have it yet he somehow didn't. I get it would be inconvenient to lose this artifact with the reset but it conflicts with his character. There are indeed more cases but you should get my point, to advance the plot the author made the MC inconsistent with his background setting which shows a lack of planning.
This novel's not my cup of tea. I don't mind some plot holes but this author writes sentences as if they were directed to kids. I can't stand reading that tone, as if mocking the readers.The introduced characters sometimes behave as if they were 5 reincarnated teenagers from modern world, not natives of the primitive world.
What can I say? The main character is annoying. She keeps contradicting herself when it comes to decision-making. She always has an answer for the unknown but at the same time doesn't, always foreshadowing and prognosticating, which makes it seem forced. Additionally, the way the'sensei' acts and presents himself is like an emo, making the story seem childish and difficult for the protagnist. He's acting like some emo who has just lost his family and wishes to destroy everything. All he cares about is killing and gaining strength, which can be extremely annoying at times. This guy won't shut up for a moment and think about his response when he's talking to his "so-called student/host." For someone who made the wish to help others, it appears that he's failing twice. I will say this: I didn't get far, and I couldn't get far. The story seems extremely slow. It's taking forever just to get out of the wasp hive, and even by then you won't know what to expect unless you pay for the rest of the chapters. Although well detailed and descriptive, the things that drag the book down are the characters as well as the pace of the story. Fair warning as well. The story seems to be leading toward Yuri, although not tagged, I like to do my own research on the novels I'm about to read, so judging from the authors' reply to others, it seems like another slow-paced, well-written but boring Yuri book. Other than that, the story seems good. For those who enjoy slow-paced stories with a bit of kingdom building, this is for you. Fair warning The characters' decisions may seem correct, but that is only because the plot allowed them to be. It makes the story seem forced, so it's up to you.
Make this this Mc a evil one that that would do anything for benefits and only things of himself and no one else
umm author nim can u post the whole chapter here plzzz
This is a masterpiece my guy, keep up the good work.
super hot .. ...........
Usually I try to give stories at least 100 chapters before giving up, however this story is an exception to the rule. Ppl said its much better later on, but I wish I could continue on. the beginning chapters are absolutely horrendous. The mc is not likeable, his actions make no sense. chapter 39 and being late is a perfect example. His friends are beyond annoying. with friends like that, who needs enemies. The world situation and humanity losing and dying, yet young masters can just go kill new recruits or whatever.... makes no sense. The system just sucks. It pretty much states, you continue swimming against the current or you die. I hate forced systems. The mc takes simp to the next lvl in beginning. that's the whole premise of the beginning and why he does things.
IF YOU DON'T LIKE THIS. THEN CLEARLY SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH YOU AND YOU MAY NEED A DOCTOR AND PSYCHOLOGIST.
ONE OF THE BEST NOVELS I HAVE READ THIS YEAR IF NOT THE BEST.
