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Another overrated fiction. It's suffering from a lot of issues, and inconsistencies are everywhere. Although it was an entertaining read before chapters 30 onwards.He was a hundreds of thousands year old god before reincarnation, but for some reason, he acts dumb, even when he's not intentionally acting.I'm fine with his people progressing quick because of him, but when they start overtaking him cause "reasons
The start is okay but I do strongly dislike when the system kind of has a mind of its own and is rude, for example; In this novel, when the MC gets the system, the system keeps calling him "stupid" or "idiot". Although the MC isn't exactly smart, the system shouldn't have that big of an opinion that it needs to constantly voice how stipid he is and just explain it instead.
Good word flow with no word problems. Novel is good so as the plot. Mc isn't over persistent but gradually becoming a reverse villian. I like it . You should like it to.
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Well at 1st the novel cover pic is captivating I give u that but the story is crap.... Just a copy of the IRAS... Well take my 1 star ?... BTW thanks for the story
Planning a revenge to the girl you hated the most is so bad guys.Hahaha you might be end it up falling in love with her!Poor you guys. Taste the pain
The story, and its content are solid. It's the formatting that makes it a tough read to get through. Especially in the beginning of the story, you will find that scenes change without a prior indicator, which gives a very disorienting experience.I really would like to read this entire story, but as the reviews and comments probably indicate by their lack of numbers, its a really tough read to get through.Should the author find the time to streamline his or her formatting to a more legible level such as those often seen with the more popular novels on here, then I would love to continue reading it.As it stands, I had to lower my rating because of the formatting and legibility of the novel.I think the author would greatly improve the fanbase numbers for his or her novels if they'd invest some time into researching this and applied the lessons learned to the entire novel.
bleh book with bleh storyauthor does not appear to understand how basic economics or level balance works like at all and main character randomly accrues ALOT of enemies for no real reason. it's not even like MC draws trouble no one guy was just like here's a lot of gold random person with no credentials whatsoever take my moneyoh you don't want to I'm gonna make all guilds hate you
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This is my first review. I just have to say that I enjoyed the concept of mythologies in this novel, although the only reason why I decided to stop reading the story was because of the dying=losing all your levels and some skill books you earned through your hard efforts. It’s not realistic whatsover, even if you think about a crazy fantasy world nobody would bother to play a game that would lose them their entire grinding and efforts, hours etc due to dying once in the game. Everything else seems good and I might start reading it again. Overall a novel with potential.
I really love this storyI like how smartthe mcAnd when the shrek seven devils become a godWhile the mc got two god seatCan't wait to read the sequel of this story
It was better than most of these multiplier novels up until actual battles started happening. Author has this weird idea that adding comedy to a scene where people are being burned to death somehow makes good story. MC is also completely r'tarded, this being part of the brand of "comedy". 23 chapters and then it went from fine to dogsh't within a span of 2 chapters....
