It's only a few chapters, but the story seems very promising. I like the plot and your characters. The quality of the text is also good, I don't see any major grammar or stylistic errors.Well done and keep up the good work, author.
Hey the author here! Shamelessly giving myself 5 stars. I hope you enjoy reading my novel!If you don't like an overpowered MC you probably shouldn't read it, although the fights are mostly between disciples. The story is mostly travelling and exploring all the realms, and slowly but surely building up a Heaven Defying Sect. If you have any suggestions or criticisms I will be happy to hear them! Please place a chapter comment or a review!P.S. English is not my first language, so if there are spelling/grammatical mistakes please say so and I will edit my chapter.
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Interesting. There are a lot of characters and some chapters are very long if reading on smartphone but it is fun to read. I feel close to Alexis and love to read her POV.
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I just started reading this and listening to it at work and I have to say I'm loving it. The ancient feud, the mystic beast and world everything is fun to read, I can't wait to see him topple this family and all they have built. ? I wonder if the final level of a mystic beast would be a humanoid form would be interesting, I love that this has a bit of beast taming in it, I hope to see more beast added so far it is a spider and a weasel yokai, I saw later he gets a humanoid follower, I hope to see some other yokai beast added maybe a kitsune ?, a mizuchi, a nekomata, a byakko, a Phoenix, a dragonhumanoid someone with oni bloodline, a tengu bloodline, someone with nurarihyon bloodline ?. Got to cover the basics ?, just throwing ideas but whatever is come I'm sure it will be awesome
WARNING: THE MC IS A SLAVE AND A SERVENT TO A WOMAN NAMED LARA. MC IS ALWAYS MANIPULATED BY THIS WOMAN AND HE NEVER GETS FREE FROM HER . HE REMAINS A SLAVE AND A SERVENT TILL THE END. Another naive MC who thinks with his lower body. He risks his life multiple times to save random side characters, using the excuse that he wants them to level up. He doesn’t even seek revenge on the bully who tormented him during school, claiming that the bully has now turned into a good person. Meanwhile, the woman who repeatedly bullied and publicly shamed him is still alive, and this fool even risked his life to save her.The worst part of the novel is a character named Lara. She’s a psychiatrist who falls under the chaotic neutral category—the type of person who only cares about herself and will do anything for her survival and benefit. Initially captured by the MC, Lara manages to use her clever mind and manipulation to turn the tables. The MC, thinking he’s in control, is actually her puppet. Lara convinces this fool that she’s the only one in the world who truly understands him, and now he’s entirely under her control.It’s almost pathetic watching how the MC behaves. He believes he’s the one in charge, that he’s manipulating and controlling Lara, but the reality is the complete opposite. He tries to act smart but ends up looking like an idiot. Despite his supposed intelligence of over 16,000, he never demonstrates or behaves like someone with such intellect. Lara, on the other hand, takes full control. Since she’s physically weaker than the MC, she uses her acting skills to make this fool fall in love with her and gets everything she wants from him.This foolish MC even claims that Lara is just like him, bruhh.. that’s your first sign to eliminate her on the spot. His personality dictates that he should backstab allies or friends the moment they become useless (as he did with Paul), yet he completely fails to see through Lara’s manipulation.ANd just when you think it's couldn't get any worse, she again Manipulates the MC into giving her his hard earned demon cores and even made the MC give her multiple skills. She even manipulated the MC into creating a safe way she can earn xp and increase her own power, and what did the MC do? he just peovided her just that, like a pathetic slave he is. Then he serve her his limited food, and even guarded her like dog. In simple terms: The MC is a fool who has been entirely manipulated by a woman who wouldn’t hesitate to abandon or kill him if it benefits her. The novel is utterly filled with frustration and poison.