Honestly. finishing 21 chapters in one shot is challenging, but "YES" I did it. Sci-Fi to it's best. As a writer who aimed to make my book Sci-Fi as well, this is a good read.
At first, the Matrioshka Brain really make my brain fried a little as I am getting too used to Chinese-style Pin-yin Novels. Suddenly introduced to a new name made me stunned for a moment there.
The story is written carefully with good consideration on the plot itself. I won't get deep into the story, but in my opinion, this is a good read. There was a hint of eastern fantasy and western fantasy mixed together, which makes this book seems better in overall quality.
Good luck in the Webnovel Spirity Award contest. Let's keep writing and I'll keep this book in my collection for my reference and motivation too.
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How come the author wrote something this brilliant. The chapters are quite long, and plotwise the book is like fire, spreading in the minds of the readers, to read more. love it.
Absolute amazing story, I'm still shocked that this book is this underrated. The plotline and the style of writing is great. The stability of the updates is really good as well. Keep it up author!
first comes the fl oh my god .she is fn amazing trust me u will not find a fl like her... I am officially her fan and the ml is my new fictional crushdamn he is hot, caring cool, powerful ,amazing.....and let's not forget they way this book is written wow...I must say it's an amazing work author.....worth the read
180+ chapters in and here is my review starting with mc who is extremely stupid sometimes arrogant and sometimes he thinks everything should be according to his will and he is also somewhat ungrateful . even though author emphasized many time that I lost count that he is mature in the story believe me he is not and if u say that he is only 14 yrs old and he has to be naive than stop calling him mature every other chapter bcz the life he had led should have made our mc mature but it only made him stupid. even though the mc has determination and he is hard-working I really dislike his thought process in many situations be it regarding his second soul bond be it regarding the time he had to endure pain while creating sub space or be it while taking others advice which he never takes bcz he is smart than others I guess this is what he thinks it looks like that to me don't know about others but yeah his thought process makes me think of him not as mc but your typical young masters. the only thing mc ever did not so stupid would be choosing artemis and i like that owl ? more than mc. the way the MC character s developing I really don't know what it will be like and I don't think it will be any good the mc had already pushed me to edge an d if it keeps going on like this I will really drop this book. and yeah revenge is not something our mc thinks about its not like he has strength to do that and it's ok not to think about it untill he gets strong. well other than mc the everything in this novel is pretty good be it world backgroud or story or cultivation system and all. that's all for my review ?
Actual garbage
Writing a review because the great plot deserves an official review (with mine just 1 to go)I can't say it's novelty as it is the result of stitching various plots already known, but the end result is great.The story per se is good.The writing quality could definitely be better, but bearable (definitely not like some mtl) (I also think it improved?!).
This book is great .I have reached chapter 300 but I just wanted to be sure before I continue reading, is this novel going to be a harem i just want to know
Got dam that synopsis is something else. It literally looks like a 10 year old kid wrote it. And he probably had a huge grin on his face after like he actually wrote something cool.
i actually already reading ir in MTL and its actually pretty good even though the MC is so cautious to the point that i see him as a coward and its also boring sometimes but its still a good read.
I like the master-disciple thingy in here so yeah i ebjoyed it and read it if you want a good read
I'll rate it 7.5/10
By the way here is the title in the mtl
"Top-level Air Luck, Quietly Practiced For Thousands of Years"
-The people were transported in an unknown world, a wastland with limited ressources and dangerous beasts, each one isolated.
Yet, by day 3 some people had gathered together into communities of more than 10 people without any means to properly locate each others. They delayed placing their shelters to stumble around for at least a day with limited food, water, and dangerous unknown beasts around. It’s unthinkable.
-Whatever he needs, he get it within a day. Blast resistant glass, I’m looking at you.
-I can accept the trade function, as it was really necessary to trade ressources. The chat function and leaderboard with streaming ruined half of the settings: apocalyptic wilderness survival.
-It looks like people from the same country were transported in the same region. Looks like a plot device to keep national borders troubles even though the goal is supposed to be humanity survival.
4 chinese shelters in the top 10. American bashing chinese. Humanitarian chinese shelter looking after the weak.
China best much, and it’s only been 5 days.
-The protagonist seriously lacks personality.