Mako_S
Overall i like it to be honest.The slice of life,The lovely couple mc and his wife against the world.I loved it for the 200 chapters.Also i cant forgive the author for skipping the background of the wife and her revenge i kinda wanted to know more.It was more about the survival of mc but then it became much more boring focusing on mostly cultivation and world building but worldbuilding is kinda vague i kinda still dont know how the world works.Mc is already so powerful i will read it to see if he gets any grandkids.
IT BEEN FOREVER SENSE U PUT ANY CHAPTERS OUT!! R U GOING TO COME BACK OR NOT?? IF NOT CAN U JUST TAKE UR BOOK DONE PLEASE BECAUSE I REALLY DONT WANT MY HOPES TO BE SO HIGH ALL THE TIME WAITING FOR U!! I LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT TO SEE IT CONTINUE BUT OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING IS GOING ON AND IF UR NOT GOING TO KEEP IT GOING THEN JUST GET RID OF IT PLEASE!! DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE BUT I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT IT TO KEEP GOING!!!
Personally, I love this book. it's a masterpiece although I've seen the idea in some other books it's still amazing reading it. Please don't stop updating, Mage, or I'll...- *cough*Back to the topic, don't stop writing! ?
I really enjoy the characters and the story. I sincerely believe Author will get more readers if they see chapters being added on a daily basis instead of how it looks to be 1/week or even more random uploads. I love a novel that I can check up on daily and continue the story daily and even reread. I will continue to vote for this novel in hopes it continues on more consistently. Thanks Blizz..
I am author I can give whatever review I like . Rest is up to you if you like than review other than you can leave.
Me seeing book centered on pets:
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So I went into this story thinking it'd be like all of the other new books and wouldn't be worth reading past the first few chapters, but to my surprise I found myself getting hooked into reading this.
So my reasoning for my score is:
Translation Quality 4/5
Everything seems good so far but these could be translations that days were spent on and when the new chapters hopefully get released we could see a quality drop.
Stability of Updates 1/5
Yes we got 60 chapters at once but if this story gets picked up I have no idea if we're looking at a once a day or a few times a week in regards to updates, I'll come back and update this if it gets picked up.
Story Development 3/5
The story seems to be a bit disjointed in terms of tone and the story seems to be rushing from one place to another, hopefully new chapters will improve these things.
Character Design 4/5
I like the characters in this story quite a bit but many of them are stereotypical and don't seem to be acting like normal people would in certain scenarios so hopefully this will improve.
World Background 3/5
The World background we see seems to be good but there isn't much outside of those small snippets that we know about the world at this point in time.
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
This novel, Condemning the Heavens, is my current main novel. It is my third cultivation novel and I have been writing it for over a year.
It follows a guy who just wishes to be a hero, but reality is cruel and life goes against him time and time again. He is forced to flee for his life and he gathers friends and companions alongside his journey.
The story is about how there is no good or evil in the world, that everything depends on the view of each individual, and that you have to fight for your own happiness.
I have written quite a few novels. On this site I have Blue Phoenix and Overthrowing Fate which both are complete and cultivation novels. Apart from them, I also have a female cultivation novel called Forsaken Immortals, which happens to be a fantasy romance, and a few other modern romance novels.
If you have nothing to read, please give these novels a try, I hope you will enjoy them!
Another very well written story by Skully. good worldbuilding, character development and writing tone contribute to a great novel. The system aspects are also very well balanced so that they add to the story, rather than taking away.
I hate these types of novels. It’s eastern fantasy but it feels like magical realism. The lack of creativity bothers me. The overuse of cliche situations to make the lead seem cool are annoying.
The author is also a convenient writer as i would say, they dont plan out situations that well and add random things later. For example first he tells how the lead kills someone, later when he is in danger he suddenly uses an item the writer never told us about and than he says that the lead picked up the item from the guy he killed.
It shows poor writing skills and thats exactly what happens in this book a lot.
