Mako_S
I decided to write my first review what had all what I think about this novel.- First of all.... ITS TOOOO SLOW PACED, reminds me about cultivation chat group where basically evry fkng day was mentioned. - Second of all is that MC loves to do some kind of useless ****. Like well... Talk with trash wich takes him like 10 chapters or more. Or do something really stupid and inconsistent. - Third is again. MAGIC. How the hell pple lvl up in there? MC basically SOLO cleans whole dungeon and gets most XP posible BUT THERE ARE PLAYERS WITH LVLS HIGHER THAT HIS?! Like wtf? - Forth is what I mentioned above and more is INFO DUMPS, just one over another. Srsly! I can basically skip entire chapters cause well... Battle wich is not even interesting. - Fifth is magic PVP masters. Game is basically VRMMO so you have to have ability to move in one way or another. Why the hell there are so much combat masters? Like srsly one over another. With their magic lvl ups.- Sixth is just story is getting boring. Like wtf? He does one thing like for 4 chapters with tons of tons of info. Also the SHOW BUT NOT TELL makes me rage. He says WOW SO NICE ITEM.... to get in description in like tons of chapters. - Seventh is that the writes said us that MC is basically 1000y.o cultivator so he has to be like so fkng OP beating evryone easily. But he has to tryhard as it looks like. - Eight is that how the game works.... Giving and boss with like milion HP? For what goddamn reason? Just to waste another 5 chapters with infodumps all over the places. - Ninth is that MC loves to waste time on useless ****. He can take a ploblem just for no reason for himself and later give excuse "I wanted to see how to pvp ingame". He just makes stuff difficult for himself for no apparent reason. Sometimes he looks like clever guy.... But a lot of times he does inconsistent ****.- Tenth is that Enemies that MC meets are over his lvl alwase and the most hatefull are crits. Like why dont you makes One shot abilities? No lets drag the battle for hrs. Why class asassin even exists? Also some class has just insane lvl of difficulty. Like combat master, where somehow you have to make your own skills wich MAGICALLY game can interpret. I'LL. MIGHT ADD MORE LATER. THE PROGRAM IS LAGGING. NICE OPTIMIZATION LOL.
Poop novel to be honest, dont fking read it. The author recycle the same fcking plot such as restaurant plot, lover plot, revenge plot, surprise lvl cultivation plot, aren't dead enemies plot and so on...
Wow I love this. the stories here is full of merits and experiences
highly recommended, nice work author
Being half way through the book I can say this now my favourite one to read!!
I think i was SCAMMED in this book. It is VERY EXPENSIVE and the story is NOT WORTH the price I paid. You charge an average of 42 for a chapter?! The plot seem to have been LIFTED from another author.
When will this book finish? Just a question to the author. I just don’t like starting an unfinished book
Aria is supposed to be renowned for her war strategy- but how? She only shows herself to be incapable of seeing the obvious. She's not smart. No one listens to her or gives her respect. She has no power in her world. None of the characters are likeable. This is a frustrating, anger-inducing read.
unfinished
beautiful stories ❣️
Fantastic start to series! It just keeps getting better!!
Please update.. I want Sydney and quade to have a happy ending .
