Mako_S
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
This is quite a great novel not fast paced or slow paced. The plot is quite thick and mc is not OP from the start it seems like his powers have 9 seals for now he unlocked his 2nd one he can type 100 lines of codes he also started to cultivate his in the first stage 2nd lvl or gate whatever it looks like he is good friends with the clans head daughter its not of the stage where there is love i hope that it does develope there soon mc started to cultivate late in his age but he recoded his body to gather qi a LOT faster so he should be able to catch with other people mc is lvl headed i like that a lot i just hope he is not dense and i hope for a harem xD
Its a one shot story thats has good character choosing.
this novel is good writing isn't bad either and i also find mc a idiot for not making use of the future knowledge he has. this is very slow paced (I don't know if I'm the impatient one here) those who like romance type of novel should definitely try to read. and I hope to author to make mc little more smart.
I got up to 42 chapters and I gotta say I like yanderes
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Its been a long time since I wanted to see a novel from here but I wanna read this novel just from the Author Note it shows so why not.
Just for clarification, is this a genderbender
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I like it, but it goes a little to fast and everyone seems a little too acepting/believd ing of his magical abilities for instance, when someone reports him to the news they all flood the school for interviews instead of calling bull****.
I really like this story! You should give this one a try. Very original. It has a different concept so far so I'm entertain by this. I'm unsure of the updates because there's 22 chapters so far and i dont know how frequent it is. Still, should keep this one in mind.
Anybody reading this, you have to read this. This is my book number 1 book so far, dont get let down by his depressed self it will bet better. I like how the author made a realistic friendship
