Scorching Black Vulture" hints at an intense and intriguing science fiction story set on the Galean planet, plagued by a devastating virus outbreak and political unrest. The title itself carries an air of danger and mystery, suggesting a central role for a formidable and enigmatic character or force within the narrative.
First review on this site. How perfect for it to be used on your amazing story. Already stated that you have a knack for writing, you’re able to pull readers into your story with simplicity, the way you describe the world in a view that it almost seems it’s coming from the character themselves. Another note to illuminate is your characters introduced so far all seem different, lifelike. I hope you continue writing.
This book is a must read the mystery behind the main character as he lied to not only us and the characters in the story but himself, his Character is well written along with other characters like my boy Renji and my girl Suzune it's a perfect five bro must read
Since there is a lack of chapters on which I can comment I have to make due with the present ones.
First off, the writing quality is very good. No “obvious“ mistakes and the like. A clear structure with a broad range of descriptions. Easy to read and understand.
The introduction is short and precise. No useless babbling about the MC's previous life.
The update stability is unclear but we'll see. For now I'll give it 5 stars, since anything else would hinder its path.
The story is quite fast paced for the first few chapters but luckily it doesn't seem rushed. Clear and well sorted, the story builds up a sense of intrigue towards the MC.
Hand in hand with the story, the character design is, despite being at the start, satisfying. Traits and actions are well presented are catch the characters mood. Later on we will see the extent of the characters potential but the current impression is mostly good.
The author avoids long descriptions and babbling, which helps the reading “flow“ and will hopefully stabilies the story. Without all that babbling the story will feel much more “genuine“.
The last point. The world background is of course hard to judge since only 6 chapters have been released.
We get to know quite a few things in those 6 chapters and I like the fact that they aren't presented in one moment. Often we have some old man the MC meets and suddenly we know everything we need to.
The MC knows a lot of things by himself but has to sort them and cannot fully rely on them since they could be wrong or only partially true.
He gets some information through some conversation etc. and not a huge amount.
I am very interested in where this is going to end up.
You have certainly captured my attention.
Unique Idea in my opinion, you don't see much of it. World Is awesome and the power system is unique and intriguing. Binging it for sure as the chapters pile up. [img=recommend]
well this novel is not bad and consept(MHA world) is good but i don't like MC power. MC is power are tech type or something like that and i prefer supernatural type and MC personalty is kinda annoying or going to be.but I'm not dropping it I'm gonna read it again letter.
The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌?
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It's really good but the MC is just way too much of a narcissistic trash. In reality the only reason he isn't dead yet is because of plot armour like being so rude and disrespectful to beings way above your power level is a death sentence in any other book. And he also thinks he's some sort of god when he can be crushed at anytime like a bug. Other than the MC the story is good but if the MC continues like this I'm afraid that this book will become a waste.
Hello. Author here.
I would like to thank everyone who had taken the time to read, vote and review the book. I appreciate the support I have received so far.
I'm a first-time writer and this is a passion work for me so a lot of thought went into writing the book to guarantee the quality as well as to ensure a seamless follow of the plot and content.
For those who happened upon the story and haven’t read it, please give it a try. I’m sure you won’t be disappointed.
The overall story, main plots, majority of the side plots and occasional missions are already set. All I’m left to do is to flesh them out and write/type down. So, barring any real-life events, you don’t have to worry about the story stopping halfway or ending abruptly.
I plan to avoid any unnecessary fillers as much as I can so that the flow of the plots will not be affected. I’m a reader myself so I know how annoying filler content can be at times.
While this comes off as heavily niched at first, It isn’t as bad as it looks. Though the basic theme centres around the Military(Conventional forces, Special Forces, Black Ops, even Intelligence and Espionage), I will extend it to other themes like romance, kingdom building and army building. Just to mention a few without giving too much away.
Anyway, how ever the story progresses, whatever changes in the story. One thing that would never change is that the characters would always be soldiers, well it’s in the name of the book after all. No matter the changes in the post, identity, influence of the characters, this would never change about them till the end.
It’s a long road to the end. I hope as many people as possible can follow the book and keep encouraging me till the end of the journey.
Once again, I’d like to thank those that reviewed the book for their support even at this early stage. It means a lot.
P.S: I’m always open to constructive criticism and suggestions.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
This novel is crap don't waste time checking it out!... one more time thid novel is crap don't waste time checking it out, don't be disappointed like me!