Loved it!Amazing work from amazing author!///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I rarely drop novels this early but I just got fed up and tired of the MC. He doesn't make sense. Many of his decisions or interactions make little logical sense as if the author didn't flush out or think things through. The descriptions of the scenes and the world around the characters was mediocre at best. I'm out and don't care if things improve later on. Not when they lost me so early on.
For start I like how the story progress until the recent chapters. I find it dumb that the main character thinks that he is untouchable. Creating enemies everywhere. I also don’t understand the reason why he should hide his bloodline skill because base on what he and his sister’s goal they need a powerful backer that can help them back to their family. Next, why does he refuse the help of ming yu? As a matter of fact if ming yu really is an enemy of his father with how ming yu is introduced he should be the type that would choose to kill a 1000 fake than let the real one escape. In short if ming yu is an enemy he would not care if he is the son or not and directly kill him because he does not have any backer. I really like the story but I am starting to lose interest because of this dumb decisions that the mc does.
Too much details, it's too irritating to read, please author, reduce the details by removing the unecessary ones and only focus on the plot, chapter 27 in but the plot doesn't forward at all, over 10 chapters of useless and unecessary details that even if you skip it, you can still know the plot overall. DON'T PAD THE WORD COUNT BY UNECESSARY DETAILS...
I like the fact that circumstances are pushing him to abandon his emotions, but it slightly irks me how powerless the MC is in all sorts of situations. He's literally being punched around by the world as of now. Please give him a nice and fluffly romance to settle down, the boy has been scarred from the betrayals~
over 300 chapters in ww , for those who are still waiting for the update here i affirm you it will never be updated. this is a great novel. i love the MC of this novel I read this and Library of heavens path both are best for relieving stress .any one recommend some comedy novel like this two.
MC spends way too much time ranting about how untrustworthy women are and how great it is to be single. The story is also uninteresting in general. Finally, to all the confused reviewers from a month ago: MC inherits the money. He chose not to inherit in the original timeline, but has decided to do so this time around, and is now waiting for his stepfather to die.
80+ mastered. a rather slow story. they strain the stuffing of a senseless intrigue like: he didn’t know yet, but it will bring him tragedy in the future (uuuuuuuuh) . and so - read, look - quite an interesting reading.
The book was very good. The characters and the way of the story creations and the way they explained was very good. Very interesting story and the way it goes on is also very good.
book is sooooooooooo awesome. .
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