say hi to racism if u want to read this novel they have foreign competition it's just like most of other novels in this genre the mc will make a company and blah blah concept is good hope any author who is reading can write this story in an alternative universe and without romance that would be legit good and don't add real world to it
Well, this is just a shameless review by Mr.Author himself. This is my first time every writing so I do hope you guys are brutally honest with my writing. Though I know for sure that it's really going to hurt reading the comments and reviews with criticism. But it's the only way to get better so hit me
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pls if you plan to make a new zombie novel in future, then could you make it like, where mc either play solo or is kind of indifferent and cold and only care about himself and no one else. He may have goal like survive, become strong or become god or something, ...........maybe one day. Well i just want to see a dark novel with strong mc and with a zombie setting where betrayal , killing, backstabbing .. ....should be kind of normal if you are weak. Like Survival of fittest or strong and weak meat or something like that. Even though i didn't like much but still your story is great, so keep up good work.
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Locked ch 4 and up = instant delete from library good book but until they stop being stupid... (delete)...........................................................................................
Nothing impressive going on here. Although the main char is a 'cultivator' thr progression is rather nonexistant and it is likr a slice of life novel. Not much action, story developmrnt is slow paced, too. Im only at chapter 90, but so far, nothing really happened and I feel like the situation is the same as in chapter 1.
I love the story plot, the way the MC create new skills, almost everything is fine, except for all the guild matters, how is even posible that all the guilds are "famous" and they have ranks like general, colonel, lieutenant and they guild didnt even exist or at least they are not created yet, thus dont make any sense, also they talk about pro players but no Esport from RML exist, the way that you are developing the guild matters are like the way described in the king's avatar, but there, they have an Esport for background, there is no way that every player know from which guild belong which player because the guilds are not created yet, you can say that you are from X famous guild and they have to believe you, this do not make any sense, also every guild member act like a Chinese sect and is so boooooring in that way, we want a story about a cultivator in a video game vs normal people or even skilled people that are a world champion in X martial art or X discipline like archery or something like that not another wuxia story with boring sect things
It’s an amazing book
I have a theory that Xi Liye has the smallest vocabulary in romantic fiction and it's the most effective writing I've ever read. Let me explain. His entire dialogue can be summarized as: "Mhm." "Got it." "I'm going to sleep." "Goodnight." "?" "Which classroom?" "Let's go." That's it. That's the whole menu. And yet—AND YET—he communicates MORE through these three-word sentences than most authors do in three chapters of flowery confession. The genius is in the subtext. When Wen Chu sends him a photo of a sandwich she loves and he replies "Got it," the surface reading is dismissal. But the author has already trained us to read between the lines. By the time he actually brings her that sandwich, every prior "Got it" recontextualizes itself. They weren't dismissals—they were promises he was quietly keeping. Wen Chu's dialogue, on the other hand, is pure chaotic energy. Her WeChat messages read exactly like how a real person texts when they're anxious and performative and trying too hard: "I was gaming with my roommates last night and forgot to say goodnight. [Guilty_Face.jpg] But I can say good morning! Good morning, boyfriend." The bracketed emoji direction is such a specific Gen-Z text habit. The way she immediately overcompensates after calling him boyfriend. The rapid-fire self-corrections in her internal monologue—"Never mind" → "Actually, no—you must stay!" This is not a character who knows what she wants. This is a character who wants things and is terrified of wanting them. The roommates' dialogue is equally distinct. Xia Yaoyao's gaming screams ("CC him! CC him! Where's the healer? Heal me!! Dammit! Is this jungler sleepwalking?!") are so authentically frustrating that I immediately understood why Wen Chu was good at the game—she'd seen this level of chaotic team dynamics before and knew exactly how to navigate it. Zhou Rui's quiet observation ("Chu Chu! You're back! How was the date? Did anything… hm?") is perfect—the trailing off, the knowing look. And Li Yue, who doesn't even respond to Xia Yaoyao's gacha teasing, is so committed to her SSR pull that the silence itself is a character moment. The narrative voice balances all of this beautifully. It's warm without being saccharine, observant without being clinical. The author has a gift for letting the humor come from character rather than authorial commentary. When Wen Chu thinks about how Xi Liye must find her internal struggle "unexpectedly amusing"—that's the narrator being witty, not the character being self-aware. The voice knows when to step back and let the moments speak for themselves.
it's like a bad remix of the understated dominance
great development of characters. Suspenseful and kept me reading from page 1