Great story. Everything is well thought without major flaws. Apart from the beginning when the game is introduced, all the story is online at chapter 101. The only weakness of the author is the lack of narration of combat scenes.The MC is actually smart and not an average Joe described as a genius only to make dumb decisions later. The fact that being strong in the game is needed for survival is a nice addition. It is an awesome plot and I can't wait to read more.
I'm the author, shamelessly giving five stars. my writing isn't the best. but I have confidence in the story itself.an evil protagonist was what I really wanted to write for a while now.(inspired by Reverend insanity from Gu Zhen Ren)the story I'm writing is of an MC who was deprived of everything. But now that she's free, she wants to experience all kinds of joy the world has to offer, and if anybody tries to stop her or take anything from her, she'll deal with it ruthlessly
I never write a review before, so all I can say is that you should give this book a try
This review is up to Chapter 103.For any ******** fan of this novel, please just ignore/skip this review as it wouldn't suit your taste.The story was quite promising at the beginning that he got into the world. I did enjoy it. But things turned bad as new characters were gradually introduced.Firstly, the content was full of filler made by side characters with primal IQ that you would constantly wonder if they were homo sapients. The main character decision making was also repetitively bizarre and unrealistic. In many occasions, it would only make sense to me if these grown up men and women were substituted with middle school boys and girls. Their conflicts have similar level of significant and intelligence.It is not that I expected a perfectly rational characters. I do find making mistakes interesting and realistic. But repeating the stupidity is exclusive for idiots. The mc is becoming harder and harder for me to bear with. So I have decided to drop this.
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Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potentialThere's a lot to improve authorThe grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read itStory development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novelsCharacter design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man.World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future.Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.
Based on the title and synopsis I can only write one word to describe it all "GENERIC".Imagine reading 2.9k chapters and you already know what to expect especially the super heavenly indominable imperial god plot armor.If I vote for this cr*p, I guess I won't get much mass release of the series like super gene from the translators.I will give this a chance and change my rating after reading a few chapters. IF THIS NOVEL REALLY DESERVES IT.
Horribly naive and it just smells of wish-fullfillment and not the feel good type... The author probably didn't even read the web novel nor the light novel... it feels that he's knowledge regarding tensei shitara slime datta ken is superficial at best, just took some powers from there and bam! that's it! while I understand that it's fanfiction and the cannon rules are to be loosely followed, this is just *******ish at best, Ancient One "just felt" that mc is good and kind and wouldn't pose a threat... and the name... Lucifer... really? I know how hard it is to come up with original names but really?
If you asking me if I ever had a chance to go back in time, then what will I do?My response will be," To close this tab when I was about to start reading this horse crap."As suggested by summary,Mc is immortal with godlike medical prowessHe returns back to earth. But it seems its 'his' earth (different names of cities.) Ofc he has a daughter.Ofc she is malnourished.Ofc his wife is taken away by her family.And on top of that, is the never ending angry mob with their nose above their heads. I couldn't be more disappointed in an author for writing sheit like this.I couldn't be more disappointed in myself for reading this crap.
Look, I'm a heavy fantasy guy, so I might seem a little bias -- but hey! I quite liked this one!It's got well written characters whose personalities have obviously been thought-out extensively by the author! At times it feels like you can hear them in the ambient noise of your room, or right next to you!Only major complaint is the quality of writing, needs a touchup here and there.
its soo goood for mee, I really like low key mc and villager mc or NPC mc ................................................................................