Pewkmon
My boy grew up
Thanks for the translator, waiting for the next chapter ?
Is there anyone who completed this novel, if so can you tell me does the translation get better from what it is on chapter 35-40
The biggest thing about this novel is that most of the beginning doesn’t make any sense. There are times where it sounds like the MC is talking to other people, when he’s actually talking to himself. One example would be, “…By the way, only traits make skills?” Or, “It’s the best.” It’s too confusing. I’m done reading this.
typical chinese cultivation novel... a lot of perverted boys, arrogant young masters, dumb elders.
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classical plot:
provoked by arrogant pr*ck then he will kill kim or them
i continue reading this because i already catch up to my most favorite novels, but deymmmn... what is this trash writing, yes he do have a system but its not detail. all is written is that "DING you've level up" man, author cant even write his current level. tho hi is getting stronger im so lost of his current level. then his energy capacity, he always recieving energy points but same as level issue, the author is not displaying it. and when he recieve a bloodline yes he fused it with himself but thats all, he disnt elaborate what is the perks of that bloodline. speaking of bloodline, he can buy it but out of nowhere when he is reaching 10,000. he got the 10,000 bloodline. i dont know if its strong or not. and in the present i think the author forgot bot thats the last time that the nloodline mention
Thank you so much for telling me this ?. It’s really great to know that. Well, I am not that good at giving tips. But I think your translation will be good if ya have the right resources and a nice editor. (And don’t drop a novel without any good reasons once you picked it up.) That’s all I think.Thank ya again *blushy blush ?
While the writing quality isn't absolute trash, it is quite close to it, there are tons of grammatical errors and ****. ( You'll see them once you start reading. ) As for the characters....
They Are Fucking Autistic. I can't hate them more, they got the IQ of a tomato (probably also share the amount of chromosomes) its actually insane.
Overall not recommended
Read the side stories guys, don't skip'em.
This story is simply amazing. Sure, it was hard to read at first because of my dislike to the MC. Who won't dislike a dude that preys on the widows of his brothers in such a way and acts so shamelessly.
But the further i went, the more i began to love the story. The MC was finally show to not be a complete morron and that he actually has morals.
Everything is perfect, the only thing that put a damper on it is the last chapters. It is obvious that the writer didn't have the will to keep writing more, so he rushed everything... and by rushed i mean along the lines of something similar to "he went to that place, conquer it, big secret enemy who has been slowly being show through the story reveals to be x, bad thigns happen, then went and defeated his archenemy, his other enemy decide to be his follower, no hope, power of bonds, they defeated the main villian, they went home, they married, everyone moves on in the world, end." in four chapters. Which hurts because everything in the story seemed to move so perfectly and flawlessly. It has so many arcs, and suddenly so much stuff is forced in just so few chapters.
Either way, hats down to the writer. Amazing story.
ts not completed yet
LMAO
2 star Evaluation... thats new
