Well the story is going pretty smoothly. I recently started reading and stumbled here while searching Sherlock Holmes to read. It's my 1st reading Mystery and Sherlock Holmes so I don't know what to expect and what makes a good mystery story but I enjoyed it so far.Please release next chapters ASAP.As for the review, I like the story but I'm not really getting that much of a mysterious vibe from the story yet. I would like if you can describe the atmosphere a little more (But don't over do it ,otherwise it will be boring).As it is the 'last case' you did a great job not describing the characters too much as everybody reading the novel already knows the characters pretty well.In the end, I just started reading mystery recently so I'm not any expert, I just gave my honest opinion. So whether to take it seriously or not is up to you. :)
Seriously? This was seriously picked over The Seventh Base??........................................................................................................
Looks, I will admit that this novel is entertaining and despite so many frustrating moments, I actually enjoy reading this.
BUT!
Here the but, is that this is novel is barely original. I just read this until 60 chapter, and maybe it will get better and more original. But damn man, at this point I can count two novel with the same plot and the same character in this novel. The first novel is Beautiful Top Star and the second is Top Management. I meant, I get it if it was only as inspiration, but all the chapters that I read so far mostly looks like cut, paste and edited.
Tbh, if it was adaptation from only Beautiful Top Star I am probably okay reading this. But then came the plot that looks almost the same as Top Management and bruh this really starting to looks like plagiarism.
Not only that but the grammar and typo also more abundant in here. But I don't mind it because I was just finishing reading some MTL novel and my mind still in mtl mode, so it was mostly okay
So far so good only waiting for the next chapter I’m loving this also please tell me if this is dropped or something?
While I definitely recommend this book to other readers, I would recommend it to older teenagers, mainly because it will resonate better with them. The writing is tame enough that younger teens could also read it, but most of the characters are adults or on the verge of *****hood. Older readers would take the most from it since they can not only relate, but they may also better pick up on and appreciate%
I love the story, the writing quality is top notch and its very very addictive like super addictive, and the character design, the detailed battle, the story line every thing is just excellent
Even if you admit this is not your work doesn't mean its ok to steal someone translation without crediting it. Do you even have their permission? This is like you admitting you steal someone work and yet still stealing it without feeling guilty.
Hi my name is Brandon gould I am responding to the review swap. I reviewed your book and I think it is a very good book and you should write more of it
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It's actually good. The characters, the flow of the story, the game itself. Just that, so many unnecessary explanations causing the story to be dragged out.
The only good thing about this novel is the number of chapters and update frequency. Thats probably the only reason ppl are reading it.
Now onto the story review,the mc is a guy that has a multiverse system that has a qq farm from the novel as well as the shadow hack.What does he do with his cheats? Nothing he doesn absolutely nothing,im not kidding when i say nothing,its not like those mc that dont abuse their system,the mc literally does nothing with his cheat.He doesnt get strong at all in the first 100 chapters which is the harry potter world.What he does do is basically suck hp's dick and his friends all story long.Whatever he worked hard to get,guess what ? He becomes a tooth fairy and gets it for everyone with a soul in the story.He is basically the cheat for the hp world for everyone.Guess since he doesnt abuse it for himself,he might as well let others abuse it for themselves right?
Now that if that isnt infuriating then we get the whole lets reveal everything to everyone trope,yeah he shows everyone what makes him special etc,why bother with the mind arts if youre gonna reveal everything lol We spend 100 chapters of him basically being the same as any other character in hp probably even worst,he isnt smart,he isnt talented he has a lot of problems but his system can fix it but he doesnt do so heh.
Now we have the next world,a world with vampires and werewolf in it.Guess what he does in such a dangerous world where he can be killed in a moment's notice? He doesnt get supernatural powers from his system oh no he doesnt capitalize on it at all.He chooses to stay human and play mysterious only to almost die from a accident. Pathetic,did i mention he is scared of needles too?
Overall this novel has a useless mc that is a doormat for every single character in every world,probably gonna be a doormat for the characters in the next world too.He is already trying to abuse his system so his vampire crush's problem could be fix rofl.
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