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Good work! Amazing and interesting story of web novel! keep it up. I like that very much.
This novel is trash. Another copy and paste
The synopsis of the novel have nothing to do with the actual novel..............................
honestly this may be the best pick along this line up. I'm a big fan of an overpowered mc and this story has just enough suspense to make it seem he will still be able to die (plot armor for the win). it's definitely a fun read anyway.
The beginning was terrible and forced humor. But it does get better after 30 chapters or so. I want this Translated just for the sake of who the Author is. Sure his previous work wasn't the best but I can also see improvement in his writing. Characters feel better and more alive.
similar to dragon . same route same genre same plot same chapters . the difference is that the other 1 summon dragon this novel summon elf .
Why has the auThour stoped writingi had really started liking this book then bam its gon i sm kinda disappointed this is s great book i juSt hope it comes back .i have rab out of things to say but thE dumb word couNt wont let me submit the comment
The book is good but people who dont like the dumb idoit mc and the wierd childish vibes and All that cringy stuff this book isnt for you the catagory of the book should chqnge from games becuase doesn’t feel a game to the reader
Amazing storytelling, attention to details is impeccable as well, but i do hope the author could pace the character's dialogues a bit to make it sound more natural. the rest of the writing is good as always...keep up the great work, hoping to read quality scifi from you
The story has an interesting concept.
Writing would benefit from an edit and a review of flow. There were several time where the story jump from here to there without a lead in, which made it hard to follow.
A few times something would change from one paragraph to the next like the author changed their mind but forgot to go back and change it.
Again, interesting story concept, just needs editing and flow check.
I found this story on Reddit and have followed it over to ko-fi cause I needed more chapters. Thank you Rangerfrank for an amazing story and a world that I’ve fallen in love with.
it's just trash which the writer made with another epic novel in mind but ended up making a piece of garbage which was reflected in the low rating due which he dropped it,the only right decision he made