Arthuremberheart
The story reads like an expanded outline describing a large amount of meaningless actions and thoughts of the MC. If you don't make your own logical leaps and imagine some other world you've already read about, then it's mostly a confusing and somewhat blank story. There's like 25-50% actual content and the rest of it is rambling nonsense about irrelevant daily actions like a kid telling their parent about their day at school. It's painful on the eyes. Every sentence is short. Each of those sentences is a tiny paragraph by itself with linebreaks. It is annoying. Also, it's written in first-person POV with thought bubbles mixed in which makes absolutely no sense when they're not head-hopping into psychic author territory. First-person POV is already that character's thoughts. Why get weird with thoughtception? It makes the formatting atrocious.
I find it boring. The whole plot is mc gets revenge which im not against but to me mc succeded at this at first 50 or so cnapters and after that is just like kicking a corpe again, its alreadl dead
Tag "Protagonist Strong from the Start" and "weak to strong"? ...OK...
only that strong? wtf so weak
2 star Evaluation... thats new
I stopped reading the novel at Chapter 134. Frankly, he had a good start, but he cannot maintain it in the following episodes.My biggest complaints while reading the novel; MC's inner world is not explained well and the developing events are not handled very deeply.If you are looking for a snack to take a break to collect chapters in the novel you are following, this novel can be your choice.I think the author is a real success, but it seems like he didn't do his best so he might not have been able to unleash the full potential of the novel.
This was an emotionally uplifting novel. I found Li Zhen Zhu's character (FL) enchanting, with her kindhearted, innocent, and pure nature. Some might label her naive, but she possessed a unique code of ethics and intelligence beyond her lack of formal education. She complemented Shen Tong Guang (ML) beautifully; despite his initial manipulations and dual identity, he evolved into a devoted husband, cherishing her for who she was and loving her deeply.
As for Xie Wu Chen (the ex-husband), his remorse came too late. The villagers, too, were portrayed as善良的人。 The additional chapters tugged at my heartstrings, as the love story between a mortal and an immortal was bittersweet, due to the stark contrast in life spans. ML patiently waited for FL's reincarnation, by her side, year after year, with his simple breads as a testament to his unwavering devotion.
Is there even a story where the female MC is a sex slave?
I think i get it.
Thanks
And after finishing one sect immediately after that another young master arrived
xd probably although they still do keep somewhat to the main story its just he has already been with the queen several times so I ASSUME its going be like cut in half or maybe 1/4 of the overall novel
Who is the fl and when we meeting her
