Grammar can always be improved but creativity comes from within. Keep it up!
5 stars from your biggest supporter and secret admirer. ;)
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I will give you a general feel for the story. There will be interactions between MC and Fang Yuan. MC is a reverend believer of Fang Yuan but also someone who dares to change fate. He will try to become stronger and also get Fang Yuan to complete the mission assigned to him by Heaven's will i.e. Foil Spectral Soul's plan. The rest is as you know. The MC will uncover the secrets behind Gu World and transmigration as he moves forward.
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I like the plot, but why is the spelling so bad? If you don't know how to right some thing go google it or ask some one how knows.
I'm personally not bothered by the spelling but I'm sure many people are.
Now that I have caught up with the story and have been following it religiously since, I got something else to say:
This is the only webnovel I deem worthy of support from the entire lot(I hope to find more, but the amount of garbage makes it nigh impossible). Even compared to actuall fantasy books that take years to write(from writers like Joe Abercrombie, Brandon Sanderson, R.A. Salvatore... you get the point) this is almost on the same playing field.
However, you cant compare a novella written on a daily basis without much review with the biggest fantasy writers of the 21st century. It would be unfair and stupid, and yet this work is relentlessly grasping at the feet of such giants and the quality reflects that.
As I keep reading, the story only keeps getting better, the characters more interesting, and the worldbuilding more believable. Even with all the pop-culture and meta refferences, this work keeps surprising. It easily brings you from ceasless bellowing laughter, to a serious atmosphere and it even throws freshly cut onions at your face(definitely not crying, ots the onion).
Can't give the writer enough praise, and while marginally subjective, my opinion allows me to rate this webnovel 11/10.
**: This is my second review and I don't care if its illegal to post more than one.
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This is a very interesting book! The plot so far is pretty engaging, and I like the way you characterized the characters. I would advise checking on the grammar, though; in places it switches between past and present tense. Great work!
The synopsis and title are both interesting. The cover is nice too and it can catch the reader's attention. I read the first chapter of this book and I noticed that the author used a good set of words
The raws contain around 10000 chapters. If my guess is good, webnovel won't pick this one form how huge it is. If i'm wrong, then, they really pick novel that is a trash fire.
Hmmm... Why does the cover look so familiar?
*cough* *cough* History’s Number One Founder *cough* *cough*