Nice story overall, love it.
Hope you keep it up Author.
Well i liked it a lot but Who the fk would fking pay for it haaaa! I fking read another fanfic bye and rot you ahole . Even if i had money i would rather spent it on something productive than to fking read a stupid fanfic.
Hello Author this story is very good so please update new chapter as soon as possible
just an average story.when reading you can feel most of the people in this novel are brain dead. and author wanted to create alot of faceslap scene but it's not successful we feel nothing when reading it.
I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power.
I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues.
Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling
Having read this before in portuguese, I can say that you guys are in for a wild and amazing ride. The history is rich and the world is very amazing. That and the small details in the history itself makes this a very good pick.
巫师：从骑士呼吸法开始肝经验
Very long story worth the read
I tried to like this novel. I really did. I could not even reach chapter 10 before I got tired of it. It’s not that it’s bad. The writing is not bad. It’s just boring. After 9 chapter nothing interesting happened. He was too happy. Too perfect. Too boring.
the names are changed and posted as a webnovel original I guess
This was just garbage what a waste of time
Grammar and choice of words are bad and I think it's common for starters but maybe will improve in future. As for other elements, I don't know how to give a review because I didn't really write a serious review. That's all and hopefully will improve in future. :)
Now THIS is a great story. I feel like the tense is a little... off putting however. “He walks away” “he walked away”. the second sounds better right? I feel like this story is an amazing plot, The characters feel so real, The world design is great. however i feel like it would have worked better in past tense format. but who knows, This is just my opinion. very good :)