"Wow, that's really cool!"(Eliza)
freedom created because abiding to a rule.
All of a sudden, the environment turned tense, like a Mexican standoff. The Princess in one corner, Pancake-etta in the other corner, Verizon on the other corner laying on a floor from a head injury that will totally not be used to return him to the status quo one way or another, and the lecherous rock senpai staring at Pancake-etta's huge tits. The good, the bad, the stupid, and the perverted senile.
He kept on looking back at the trees far behind them and he could still see the silhouettes following their group.
"Window broke from the outside in, the edges are melted so fire was involved, maybe an explosion," Peter looked at the erratic placement of the glass, almost like wind pressure pushed it around.
Nice~ thx for the chap~
"This won't be my first arrest." Bailey said, as if a cell floor was already her second home.
"Loki's said to be physically the strongest of this generation's super rookies!"
Kinda sucks. Not fun reading. Oberall the translation quality is pretty good but the story itself is stupid and unrealistic. Not recommended. There isn't alot of chapters though so maybe itll get better later
I really enjoyed the story because of its captivating plot twists and well-developed characters.The setting of the story was beautifully described, transporting me to a different world with vivid imagery and immersive details.Overall, I would highly recommend this story to anyone. It's a captivating tale that will stay with you long after you've turned the final page.
At Chapter 23This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better.The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world.So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story.The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak.So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic.Kudos to the author.
Going to read it for the the event hope it's good