Great story so far I like how you describe the beginning, like we were watching the begining of Like a movie or something, you do really good on showing how the character feels and acts, the only mistakes I can see are some minor spelling ones, so keep up the hard work and I hope to reed more of this!
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Finished the novel.MC's space reminds me of Lord of Mysteries and Museum of Deadly Beasts. It's fast paced for people who like blood rushing vibes. Was quite a good mystery & investigation & undercover & battle novel up to some point, even though MC was full of godlike cheats (they are explained at the very end).The novel started detoriating real fast once the plot of eastern jurisdiction was over. The novel can be said to be good mostly up to this point. In final notes, author admits that ,,it collapsed in the middle and late stages, which also greatly affected my creative passion and confidence" as well as ,,the more I write, the less I feel".After the plot of eastern jurisdiction, the chapters are a mess, everything feels so rushed and braindead, author skips many interesting and possible plots and dealings with characters, ugh, it's very anti-climatic.As for MC himself: he is not that likeable. Quite a psycho with twisted morality, lots of abilities are very dark. With all the cheats and power he has, he definitely didn't need to bloodbath so many characters, or when he knew the truth, he could just drop his petty reasoning at getting at them. And he sure is greedy for women...I have just learnt that one of the author's older books is actually "I'll Add Points to All Things". I digged into it years ago, and completely dropped at chapter 297. It was worse than current novel, it had promising start, but as far as I can remember it collapsed much earlier, while psycho MC among other things like rac... killed it.Anyway, have fun reading!
Hello everyone!This novel has some major flaws. In my opinion, the greatest flaw is unrealistic gamers and lots of small flaws due to that.List of core flaws:1) I would like to notice that gamers are not playing closed beta. Closed beta is a paid job where people are testing everything to find bugs. Closed beta testers can not post anything or disclose any information. We can let it slide thou, there are different companies out there. Untested game capsules from unknown game company... aren't it insanely suspicious?2) In this novel people are complaining about bugs which is quite strange. For example WOW has bugs after each new update (since vanilla till BFA ^^ ), which is common for such huge game, and people are complaining and insult developers *in beta* ... aren't it absurd? Same for servers maintance.3) People are not worried about lack of feedback and support mechanisms (again it is BETA testing!)4) People are offering money for in game currency. 4.1) Looking at insane prices, real testers would have submited a report and wait while all prices would have been reduced (like in most betas).4.2) In all betas that I know, all beta progress stays in beta, and real game is real game.4.3) It is BETA, you do not play it, you test a game.5) It is BETA testing! Developers ask for beta testing, not players. Most gamers can not play for more then 2 hours per day, and even those who can, usually refuse to play unrefined games. So thousands beta requests is kinda...Basic minor flaws are from biology. Let us take for granted that goblin is equal in strenght to a common human male. If human mine ore, excavate stone, cut something, etc he get bruises and small cuts. Without gloves even tough skinned man can not really mine or drag something without inflicting self damage. And now let us remember that tools are rude and have no handle... So goblins are tough as hell (more like made from steel ^^ ) or Demon Lord heals them every 2-3 hours (or they will just bleed to death).I can continue, but this review is already far too long.Thank you for your time and have a great day!
Beginning is pretty cliche, but...This novel is basically A SUPERIOR version of Gamers of the Underworld MIXED WITH amazing plot from The Legendary Mechanic.Gamers of the Underworld are trash btw. and so is Boss Behind the Game. Even more so compared to I have a bunch of players on Earth.Overlord Xiye may not be as amazing as Black Star, but the Earth here will probably follow the same plot which is Planet joining galaxy. The game is not much of a game, because players are already starting to believe that this is not a game. Also, Earth in this novel has something similar to coronavirus outbreak haha truly delivered on time. Side characters have personalities and they are honestly better off as MCs than the MC himself there.
I read till chapter 20. I love stories like this. :)
Overpowered prick of a main character kills other arrogant pricks in most gruesome ways possible. Author is trying to write about how awesome is his character by putting him against other arrogant or cruel pricks but less awesome than him. Charactrs, fights, development, plot and more are so shallow that ants won't drown at its depth. Do not read this wate of a time. At first you might see an illusion author wants us to see, but be awere that time you wasted will not come back.
Sect building - checkMC dimensional place like he can bring people inside -checkLoving and loyal ally - checkClever MC -checkTransmigration- checkMedical knowledge of MC - checkFormation and inscriber MC - checkMC meticulous planner - checkUnique profound vein and arts - checkMysterious Background -checkWorld background and development - c heckMC development checkMC sometimes perveted mind --heckYour addicion reading this novel - check
Worth reading for a while but occasionally you get multiple chapters where the names of certain objects, techniques, alliances, or countries change drastically.I can't even remember if Meng Chong uses a knife, saber, or blade anymore, and have stopped trying to figure it out.Dahua becomes Great WildsDemon Lord becomes Magic LordEvery time the reading gets fun and exciting a glaring error appears and detracts from it. The MTL is lazy and inconsistent.The writing and characters are fun though.
Acredito que o talento dele de monopólio, faria mais sentido em um mundo de fantasia Xianxia, ou Wuxia algo do tipo, e seria bem mais interessante do que em um mundo moderno, com habilidades e ranks!
Seems like a "Wish fulfilment" novel ?Seems like a "Wish fulfilment" novel ?Seems like a "Wish fulfilment" novel ?Seems like a "Wish fulfilment" novel ?Seems like a "Wish fulfilment" novel ?
Will there be multiple partners or one partner. ?????? ,...................... What's the end game. ????? Rule the world or casual *** till death ????? The updates are regular which is really good.