DrowsyHobo
Thanks for the chapter
Yu Mei bit her lips once more when she felt that part of him push on her thigh.
[Ninjutsu]
They encounter many life and death situations, however, with Eve sense, it seem there is a safe path.
I like it it’s really good and it’s the beast and I would like some more of it
Severe attachment?
Zi Wu shakes his head, helplessly smiling: "Isn't it still the usual, how are the state affairs?"
well if you kill her parents like other authors , i'll stop reading the story.I still cant understand why authors like to kill the protagonist's parents or siblings,i mean u can have him/her make a bond/friendship with someone else and kill then kill that being.there's no need to harm the family for the growth of protagonist.
As a new reader, i appreciate that the writer wrote small chapters at first, so that we dont feel burdened when reading it. He also maintained the pacereallynicely.
Alurnya Bagus, Cuma update nya yang Terlalu lama
This is a great novel with a lot of potential, with a little editing, am sure people will realize it. Now it just looks like a block of words which are a little overwhelming to read.
Author here,I'm trying to go through another phase of my writing This is another genre far different from the first book I'm writing Do well to tell me if it's going well
