Shamlessly rating my own works;)
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I'd recommend that you completely skip the first 12 chapters if you decide to read this sub-par piece of work. Why? Because they are autism in its purest, most concentrated form. The interactions between the characters are so bad and awkward that I actually cringed while reading. The next four chapters are a lot better, mainly because this author has no idea how to talk to people normally, nor does he know how a lot of the laws and regulations about selling unlicensed goods work. Which doesn't show as much when the protagonist has nobody to talk to or interact with(Other than hot and slimy clam girls ofc). Basically, the fist 12 chapters are unreadable, the rest are decent. This is not a book for those who are looking for well developed, interesting characters with fleshed out backstories that interact with and influence the plot. Nor is it for people who look for great world building, or a world that has a lot of interesting history and hidden background like Emperor's Domination. I'd only recommend this to people who are bored and want to read something that doesn't take more than 10 brain-cells to understand. The novel would become a lot more interesting if it takes a darker turn later on, where the protagonist would begin to devour humans for dragon energy, and start a war against humanity with his fish armies.
The plot and such is interesting, the mc has a system that expands his power, he can choose people to become the first cultivators and all in all, the system is there to change the whole world to a higher plane.
(Examples: Low-grade martial world - > Mid-grade martial world)
But, it's not interesting for me just because of one petty reason.
The mc is a douchebag, he has three maids taking care of him and the youngest one is about 11 years old.
But he scolds her like no tomorrow. Idk why!? She is just a young child! Why do you treat other children with care and your youngest maid gets scolded!?
SHE IS 11 years old! And so innocent, I cant take that the mc isn't nice to her.
Although I read to ch 24, I dont know if there is a reason why the mc treats his youngest maid so harsh, I dont care anymore, I drop it.
(At first it's a little overboard teasing but it gets to scolding later/bullying)
Saying 'shut up and behave' to a child.. Tsk tsk, it's your maid no less.
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HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here.The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d?. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review.And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stone or send coffee gifts.I leave it here if you wanted to rant at me:Discord: @CloudSky#4375 BIG THANKS FOR READING!!
It's very well written and the characters are nice, but the best parts are the descriptive pieces which make the world come to life. I like the way the chapters are structured to give bits and pieces of information which just flow off into the next chapter really easily, but can be a little confusing at first. There's a lot of potential.
Anyway you can start updating again?Its dope