did you drop this story??................................................................................................................................
nice
Psycho MC and the characters are as flat as in other check in novels. This is a skip....................................................................
From my expierence on this website I have read many of good books. But honestly none of them even come close to the quality that is shown from this one. I cant help but feel refreshed when reading this book, not because I enjoy the main characters pain but because his pain is actually relatable. He doesnt only get physically hurt like most main characters but he also gets mentally hurt. His struggles are not only large monsters that want to smash him to a pulp but also his struggle to understand himself and what he feels during his journey. Never have I read such a good book on this website and I honestly doubt anything will come close for quite awhile. Bravo and keep up the great work Mr. Author.
honestly not a bad read but in serious need of editing.
As I'm not that great in writing I will just say what I think is annoying for a reader. This (Mom:,Dad:) it's annoying, you can improve by getting rid of it and use something else that will help readers to identify who speaks at the moment. That's all, I'm looking forward for your improvement.
The story is excellent with lot of action scene as well as erotic scenes... Less of fillers in this story... Overall superb novel not like Mga and other filler novels
great novel i like it please post it am in love ........................... . ....................................... .........
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i feel like i've read a novel with similar concept it was in ancient cchina though mc had a "dead house system" meaning he ccant eave the house but he levels up if he stays in house. i'll see if ii an find it. No promises though if i find it i'll post it here.
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awesome world building and storytelling. the author is sure an experienced writer. story pace and development are on point.
hope to see more of this
please more...
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