i think Qidian should add books after they have more than 10chapters just so we can review the novel..but anyway sypnosis looks great but im intriqued how did he know about cultivation inside the womb when he came from modern world
This is a great and enthralling novel by the same author of TKA. I have no idea why some reviews call the characters flat. I really enjoy the characters of the mercenary group and find them to be entertaining. This really scratches the itch for VRMMO novels.
Greetings, my fellow cultured ladies and gentlemen. If you have read this book in the past but then dropped it for whatever reason, this review is for you. Minor spoilers ahead! Beware.
After taking feedback from readers and editors alike, I have went back and edited a lot of the previous storyline (e.g. bringing the huntress along, MC making 'mistakes' despite his years of experience) to make it more realistic and fitting of the MC's character. I sincerely recommend giving this book another try, as I have fixed many of the previous inconsistencies.
Thank you to everyone who does give this book another shot, and I hope you all have an awesome day. :)
I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.
This was taken from FF. Real name is eyes of the soul. Don’t know if this is the same author, if not please credit them. Thanks………. …. …. .
The writing quality isnt half bad and the quality doesnt jump around mutch either makiing it easier to read, perhaps personally as a fast reader i would enjoy more updates but as it is a original that might be a bit too much to ask for.
Characters aren't completely generic but still a few anoying gimmicks that i personaly dislike but its good as a whole.
Music is the food for soul and the soul of this master is a glutton. A novel without music is lika an Oreo without the cream, it taste good but it feels like there's something missing. Nuf said
Wild megane-ojisan spotted! It used Review! It's super effective!
Hey, it's a sci-fi fanfic which actually got me hankering to play the game it's based on lol. That, in itself, speaks volumes about the work.
The work you put in with introducing the overall setting and lore is worthy of applause. And the fanfic itself is engaging enough. The grammar is good. It just has some hiccups occasionally, but not enough to detract from the reading experience.
All in all, a stellar read. Great job!
A great story for fans of sci-fi. Author delivered substantial details to show a developed advanced setting with diverse characters. World-building is exceptional, with subtle hints, and exquisite detail. The story is entertaining and I look forward to future updates! I'm surprised there are not more reviews!!
Anthony.... Reborn as an Ant....
Ok. That right there is so bad. Thats gotta be the worst pun I've ever fucking seen out of all the novels ive seen on this site, and I fucking love it.
This is one of the rarest times that i bought privilege for a novel and i have not regret it. I just want to read more of it. Yes, The power system of the mages is not mentioned like the level of each mage and there are some elements of Harry Potter in the beginning and some of the things are not mentioned. But still it's addicting.I Hope author releases a lot more chapters a day :u2060-u2060)
It is a great Book. A great writing skill. I like so much this novel. I wish there will more novel like this is to interesting novel. Thank you for this novel.