Hi everyone, the author is here...Oh man! it's so lonely over here, I don't know if anyone is gonna join the party. Well, before anyone comes let me give myself a small shameless push!
I read a couple of chapters and I'm completely entranced by your writing style. The imagery is just *chefs kiss* It almost feels like I'm IN the book, experiencing everything Marco is going through. Great work author, definitely looking forward to future updates!!
I knew I would love this. Mystery is my favorite genre. The dialogues are gold. I could feel the hurt in Bianca's voice when she was arguing with her mom. The action description also during the exchange of dialogues between characters were superb. I'm very interested in finding out what exactly happened to her friends. This is a must read! ?
at first I liked it, I thought It was good to have some changes in the default settings of MCs being fearless and I thought I would see some character growth, but he stays with same personality, at least till chapter 56 I couldn't continue after that...if you don't like whimp idiotic (not always idiot) MC, then this book isn't for you.
WARNING TO ALL POTENTIAL READERS: within 20 chapters the (mentally adult) mc has a wet dream about his sister (who is a child). I don't plan to read past that point as the author was kind enough to show the P H A T E S T red flag before wasting too much of my time. If this is any indication of the mc's future romantic pursuits, then I fear for the children when he gains enough power to be unopposed in his "affections." Now, this might just be my burnout of mediocre stories talking, but I'd rather read the life stories on recipe blogs than Power Abuse Fantasy #35927.
solemn call to all you guys reading this...STOP. It's good but not as good as the other one(Alien evolution system) , and he stopped that one cause a lot of people are reading this. So please stop and read Alien Evolution ( it's the best novel I've come across soo far and it doesn't have plot holes like other good noveks like supreme magus. So please for the sake of all things good read Alien evolution system ????
Same thing is interesting going on here.
Good read only ready first part but from what I have read so far it is an amusing story full of subtle serious notes while having a healthy dose of comedy
Too cringey for me.........................................................................................................................
authors way of story telling is very blunt. felt no feeling from reading.no explanation about system, world background,power level, skill slots..etc.there is no character development or certain logic why mc doing things.author has alot of ideas but he is not a good story teller.
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
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