Once they entered the sect, they would no longer be the same as ordinary people. Regardless of the sect's halo or the rare treasures in the sect, both were full of spirit energy, and this was a very appealing attraction for ambitious youth like them.
I've binged and completed all chapters up to date in 8 hours. So many good idioms, the dialogue is amazingly well-thought and characters are good. Reminds me of those Chinese palace dramas, but a lot more detailed and interesting. Cant wait for next update !!
This is already a novel? it's got an english translation of it on gravitytales. weird it'd be coming here after 150 chapters on there. seems alittle pointless to me
pretty great start ??????? don't give up this novel ????
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Interesting story. Sometimes the names are not correct and you sometimes don't recognize "who is talking". Lots of exciting scenes, but sometimes it seems to me that the MC doesn't really want to get stronger and gives away far too much information. But what makes the story unbearable is the harem aspect and Medusa and Luna. Still, I'm quite motivated to read it.
The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure.The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels.As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.
The characters lack depth. Especially the wife. I would have forgotten her if she wasn’t mentioned once in a while. The protagonist doesn’t seem to think before acting, making me wonder why he did this or that. An exemple is having the USA agents killed. It doesn’t help anyone. Also, he doesn’t seem bothered after being directly responsible for the murder of hundreds of people.The technology he is offered is way ahead of what Earth is capable, and he should have to spend a serious amount of time and ressources developing the intermediate steps. He reach those steps too easily (if he didn’t bypass them). The author should check technology trees in games such as the one who share its name with the title of this work, and remember that theory and practice/application are differents.Also, the system rewards are much to great for the tech development he completed.World background is lacking. Little to no description of the characters, surroundings, buildings and inventions.Interesting, but the execution need some work.
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I love this story,got me hooked from the first chapterThe MC is quite intelligent and the world building is very good You should try this
I don't know Why but............ I like this book well written and the Action scenes are Great as an author I struggle to Write Action Scenes but it seems to come to the You easy. Another thing I like about the book is that the main character is likable. I have only Read A few Chapter but this book is now added to my Libary
Only a few chaps are out so I cannot give constructive feedback. Nevertheless, interesting story. There are little to no grammatical errors. The character design also seems good so far. The story has potential and I can't wait to see what the author will give us. Still, I suggest the author not using unfamiliar words like 'tuk-tuk' and work on the world background.