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A Game Novel? A GAME NOV-- WAIT A RING?! YES A RIN-- ITS ALMIGHTY?! ITS FKIN ALMIG-- FACE SLAPPING SCENES?! FACE SLAPPI-- A COMEDY NOVEL?! A COMED-- IM IN.
I love this book. Pls author speed up update.
I don’t get the reviews criticizing the MC for not cultivating 16 chapters in. I mean it’s only 16 chapters. Within 16 standard length chapters, you can either establish MC personality and background or have the MC be a monotone bore with no real reasoning but already OP. A well developed MC is better.
Overall, this story is starting with an interesting concept. There is an opportunity for more exploration on the psychological development of the MC, as it’s brushed on, but so far, not integrated to the level it could be.
first of all im a big fan of the mythology genre ( greek, norse, indian, egyptian mythology etc...) first of all the mc ezra zephyr was naive innocent and ignorant in the beginning, but after his years of training with the wolf of norse fenrir he became cunning, ruthless etc.. and it was beautifully done. the characters developed is clearly to see. not only ezra but also those around him. when you start reading it it's hard to stop there no dumb mc no stupid young manster and all those cliché stuff. little of the world is beaing revealed right cause it's still the beginning of the novel. i did escpect ezra to be a bit more overpowering than how is now. there's a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing major.
im not really good at writing reviews but guys this is a hidden gem give it a try and you won't be disappointed.
Love the story so far and gonna keep reading.Only downside i see is that a 33 year old is not supposed to be like he is at the beginning even without all the caliber issues
Really good novel, nice writing and character development
...........................................................................................................it is good i just hope u dont drop it.
A pleasurable masterpiece, with a well-arranged story, developed, the character design splendid, well thought out updating stability and a fitting background.
Overall, love the idea but room for improvement.
Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding.
Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21
I love this book and it's author, for any reader looking forward to understanding Chinese fantasy, I recommend this novel #BlaWhiImmGod.[img=update][img=recommend]
New reader added to the list. This has got everything I can ask for. Great job, don't drop it please. I would love to read every single chapter...
Thanks for this masterpiece...
Writing Quality: 89% Perfect
Story Development: 99.9% Perfect
Character Design: 99% Perfect
Updating Stability: 89% perfect
World Background: 99.9% Perfect
I can't describe how much I felt hooked to this book. It reminds me of the Giant and horror movies that I used to watch. This book really felt like I was watching a movie. And I appreciate the author's effort and commitment towards writing this book. Even if he couldn't write in a day or two, it is worth your effort. The flow of the grammar makes the storylines more attractive to read.
Hoping to see you get more popular with this book. (Annyeonghi gaseyo
