It was very well written and very exciting.
Author, when you do scene breaks, system information etc.. can you please use less '-' '=' etc? You don't really need that many of them to denote a break/transition. For those of us that use audio feature it is extremely painful to hear "minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus " listen to a few sentences only to have it repeat again... and again...
The racism is strong with this one… otherwise it’s an interesting idea and overall enjoyable… just so much racism distracts from the story…
Cool novel, at least from what I read. I'm having trouble unlocking chaps even when I have coins. I'll just give my gifts then....... What a drag.......Honestly
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
Never! Never! Never!
Never! Never!
Hah, the homework is finally finish. Now, just wait for the bell.
I sighed. "So Writerz, have you done the homework?"
The chair electrocute me and shocked me. "Okay, Carl, do you remember anything now?"
But he was a man, what i should i call him? Nurseman maybe?
He looked at her then chuckled. "Did she just pass out?" he began to laugh really hard.