Dialogue needs a little cleaning up but a great effort that shows promise!
no updates in forever
I loved this book the first time I read it. Now that I am going back ALOT of the dialogue and other details have been edited out of the book and I now do not like it at all. It takes away from the over all visuals and etc of the book while reading it.
omg u do read these post thank u so much for noticing me.and for the 3rd book name.when is it going to be released.I thought the fairy fire would speak to blaze.like it did to drake.letting him kn that Bella will be ok.please tell us how they knew which twin to take&how the parents didn't kn.
updates updates pls pls
Good story but takes too long for updates.
Amazing Work?
Please update soon!
Looking forward for Lucy journey
loved this story couldn't put it down had to keep reading
So Inspiring
Excellent writing