Everything is perfect with writing to World building The mc steal people wives/Mom/Girlfriend Dear Author Can you please provide a additional note which contain all characters info and relationship with other characters it help to remember all characters
Promising start — curious to see where this goes
This story is absolutely captivating! I find myself drawn into its enchanting world, and I’m excited to see how it develops. The prospect of daily updates adds an extra layer of anticipation, making me eager to follow along and uncover the unfolding mysteries and adventures. I can’t wait to see where the journey takes us!
Very well written please keep it up author looking forward to more chapters ?
Interest highly recommended please go to it without a second thought
From the views, the other reviews and all, I bet you already know this book is just what you've always wanted to read.The plot, the setting, the character design, writing quality (which definitely improves per sentence and chapter) is just one of the best I've ever seen.Now I know why it got so much supporters, this is just the best work and it makes me want to make mine better *I just pray I'm able to though*I literally can't wait to see this book in greater heights and bigger places on the WN boards.Dear Author, I cheer you with all my heart??
Not bad. I managed to read the first four chapters and I cn tell this story is lit.? I’m adding u to my collection~
This book is amazing and it's extremely underrated. You have no idea how underrated this Book is I suggest you give it a try.It is amazing that often uses A lot of math to justify actions in the book and that help Great read
this is a good novel so far yhe only problem is the start it needs to be either re-writen or edited because spelling and whatnot is not done well until a few chapters in when spelling mistakes disappear for the most part
Very nice story.line Author choose character name wisely The imagination of writer is mind blowing . I suggest this story if you are interested in action and suspense than definitely this story is for u
I don't know why people are saying it is slow it's actually good Author is taking his time I think it will be a good novel I am looking forward to it
Let me go over one by one.Writing Quality had become great. I read and reviewed one of the author's previous books and from there, his writing quality has jumped way higher. There are no Grammer mistakes, at least none I could catch. There is a bit too much exposition sometimes, like explaining the customs of the land and their significance along with describing the reactions of the supporting main leads a bit too extensively. The first is needed in all respects lest the readers feel alienated but the latter could have been toned down just a bit, but that's just my opinion.Story Development so far is great. The author really catches your attention and doesn't let go. me, personally, I didn't like the addition of the harem from Greek mythology but that's just my personal preference. I do feel that it was revealed too soon, but then again, revealing it too late might have led to the readers growing attached to Draupadi only.Characters are all dynamic and serve their own purpose. Especially the character of Krishna was so beautifully added. I do have some bias about the way the author underlines the Dynamic between the Kauravas and the Pandavas though. In a lot of literary and TV media, you always see the authors or the directors take a side and support a particular group and the author does the same and supports the Kauravas. But there stands to reason that no one in the Mahabharata is actually a good character. They're certainly not bad as they are followers of Dharma, but they are evil in a way that does not violate the Dharma of that age and that has been beautifully underlined in the original Epic. But then again, these are all creative choices and the author writes the characters beautifully.Update Stablility is great.World Background instantly gets a five star since the work it's trying to adapt is so expansive and complex by itself. it can make way for a lot of interesting philosophical and narrative moments. and the existence of other myths only aids to that.Wish you well author! keep writing!