was searching something like this for so long Je suis content d'avoir trouvé quelque chose de génial, je vais le terminer en une nuit ! ⏱️
This story is not how it seems, never believe that you know what’s going to happen next because there is an almost assured chance that your going to be smacked with a new surprise at least once or even multiple times a chapter, this doesn’t mean the story is hard to understand if you pay attention though, keep an open mind about anything and everything that happens and expect the unexpected, this story is the funnest read for those who like plot twists
This is a new author with no experience. Thank you everyone for your support. Please give your suggestion for story background of new arc before each arc ends and I will try to create a story that will be enjoyable to best by my readers and supporters. ❤❤Thank you .
Impressive I am planning to buy your story so where can I contact you because your story has the potential so can we continue the talk in gmail
It's a good story but the pace is TOO FAST!?
Like, "Wait what? What happened again?"
There's no time for readers to digest what's happening and the characters lack reaction (e.g. When the co-worker saw his new car or when the boss got pointed a gun and blackmailed)
Also, you have a lot of mistakes with a & an, now & know as well as to & too...
It would be great if you could separate the conversation into different paragraphs:
I said, "...."
My boss, "..." exclaimed.
Something like that...
I hope this helps your group...
-from Originals Author Society
how you moneytige your mobile please explain me I m a new writer and I don't how to money tige
Love the novel. I can already see that going all the way with it. If I actually have red eyes in real life, I'll be so happy
Sometimes, you read a book and it fills you with this weird evangelical zeal, and you become convinced that the shattered world will never be put back together unless and until all living humans read the book.
Yoo bro Anxi I've been idle for too long and forgot you were writing another novel. Well, this one is also great I have to say, you never cease to amaze me. Keep up the good work.
W novel.
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I really like this book, lots of potential and also extremely enjoyable. The MC is OP, of course, but he remains careful and doesn’t get arrogant which is extremely refreshing for this type of book. VEry enjoyable, the only down side is that not enough chapters have been written and so you end up waiting a while for each chapter (about 12 to 18 hours) but the longer this book stays on the market the better this will get. Can’t wait to read more!