MICHAEL_HENRY
Tenth year of Yong Ge, the emperor falls gravely ill, electing Tai Hao, son of Prince Si as crown prince.
okay author dont be greedy and update regularly rather than updating it in the privilage section or the audience will lose their interest.
Peak fiction, one of the better magic novels. I have been reading for a long time, and I have no regrets. Character is interesting and complex at the same time. The book has a pretty large world that I can't wait to explore. the only problem is that the pacing is somewhat slow. I am really close to ch 700 and the mc hasn't even reached the high tiers of magic yet, I think he is about to become a tier 3 mage and there are tones more levels to go. but still, I'm excited to continue reading.
it was good, but around 130 chapters it's all started going downhill. it's too predictable, the drama became too much, and them dramas are garbage, author don't have any creativity. the plot become too forced, the novel just become some low level garbage novel. mc id an ex Gang member, lived with drugs and guns, but then somehow he forgot his way? litterally just trust everyone. guards down. and dumb too. so dumb. it's all bs. trash, garbage, dogsht. im so mad and disappointed rn. usually i'd feel bad if i curse like thia, but this author deserve it. u let me down big time
This is really mind blowing and interesting. Nice art work ?, top notch...Also I like the way the characters connect and align with each other, makes it inspirational and gives you a wider imagination.
Loving it so far. The story is very entertaining to me mostly just watching as the MC's daily life is balanced between being a "power in the shadows" and a "MOB" character at the same time.I do hope that eventually some things are brought to the forefront, as I can't say I enjoy the "lack of observation" archtype of some side characters that is generally employed in these kinds of series.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?ADVICENone, the author was a better writer than me...... Kudos!
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Im pumped for more releases. The grammar is surprisingly good and the story itself doesn't seem too bad.Take my stones
This story truly depicts the truth of the lives of most of the people in modern times.The plot and characters are very lifelike and also, their interactions are what we can experience just by reading.Character design is one of the main attractions of this story. The characters come to highlight with every interaction and their nature's and actions are easily distinguishable.The plot is also amazing and keeps you hooked up.Truly a great work by the author
