MICHAEL_HENRY
Early I released a chapter but I deleted it. Because after much thinking and with great difficulty I realized that I was only writing this kind of novel because it was similar to what was popular on this website but it wasn't something that I was passionate about. After and during the holiday I had time to think and It dawned on me that I only continued writing this novel for my viewers and not for myself. I had to force myself to keep writing this and I didn't look forward to writing this anymore. it was to point that it felt like was doing homework, I startled to loathe it. Now that I have less time to write, I don't think I can sustain this in the long term.
"I can understand you. We're speaking and I understand you as if we're speaking the same language. So why can't I read any of these books?" Alex gestured at the bookshelves, "All the titles are in a foreign language to me."
[You have made an amazing advance in your psychic abilities! The creation of psionic crystals is a large step towards Protoss Technology. You are in the right direction.]
This story had so much potential and plot to it..but the came the MC. Now I don't know if the MC is just dumb or if the author is 4. The MC told another stick that he was blessed by a god (his trump card) and that he use to be a human! He willingly does it! The author makes some BS like nobody's perfect, well clearly not. The author Is so awful with common sense that I instantly dropped the novel.
Well first of all, this is coming from a person who've already watched the drama version, Cinderella chef. The way the female protagonist, yaoyao transmigrated is different and is too cliche in here. She just died and got reincarnated while in the drama, she went into the past through an invented item of a suicidal person. This is a minus in the story development since the ending of the two will deviate greatly. Another minus is the character design. For me, the male lead, Xia Chunyu, is not as cool/mary sue as he was in the drama. He doesn't think as careful as he did, in short a little bit short minded. So for the possible/future readers of this book, if you want to enjoy this one you must definitely not watch the drama version first because you would definitely get disappointed. But if you're curious and watched then read the book version, you could be like me who's comparing the differences of the characters' qualities and of the plot as I read.
"Right?" Lie asked while grinning.
Some of the birds that were perched on the branches of the bush were shocked and flew while shouting. The three of them also seemed surprised by the blast of their flute sound. Both
"Do not worry much about me, and no one can get in my way" Yama declared until he heard an annoying voice.
What the heck? I don't get you, mister.
GET IT WHILE IT'S FREE! Okay so I'm not saying this is better than Shadow Slave or Supreme Magus. But it's certainly on par with them. It starts as a rom-com teen / lighthearted transmigration story.... and then BAM. It gets dark. It gets real. It's brilliantly told and flawlessly executed. The growth, the aging through time, the sentence structure, atmosphere and world building. It's perfect. I have zero complaints.
hello author, I'm excited to read the next chapter. I'm somewhat new, and this is the first novel the I read overnight and was amazed by the plot and the story. I wonder if I can get a reply XD. Thank you. although I don't comment much, this is the first time I commented long. looking forward to your work.
DONT BOTHER TO READ ITMC gets his body taken over in over 1000+ chapters and he starts again with no dimension, no bloodline, no beast, jsut crippled body, all his efforts gone down the drain because of some stupid decisions, the "Dayus" player he bashed and beat up schemed against him which led to his body being taken over, he lsot everything and probably gonna take 300 chapters to recover everything, so basically, the story(chapter1-1250), filler(1251-1400+).
