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good stable novel , with good character and story development. hope it lasts to the very end

Finished the whole novel.
It was quite enjoyable until the last arc with Western Region.
Very rushed. The ending was anti-climatic. The revelations were whatever, no shock. Did the author get bored and just wanted to finish it asap? A shame, in the earlier chapters he wanted to write something of quality.
And it's a shame they haven't crossed the world with other mortal or immortal worlds.
Due to the last ~20 chapters I can only lower the rating.
If you're looking for a similiar novel, check out Invincible Uncle-Grandmaster. This one has better ending.

Everything is 5 stars expect for Consistency and translation quality. I bet if the the Authors knew what this **** head translator was causing his novel he would probally beat the translator.

Let's see how that ***** shweta brags now huh.  Absolutely loving this novel, hopefully you can go all out in production after your exams thanks for the great story

It's a good book. I like the fact that the power doesn't change but the mc has to think of ways to use it effectively. The characters tho they feel 2d dimensional most of the time but there are good bases for good character writing here. World background is something I am more interested in it's very subtle but it's working I guess.

Dude please keep on writing this book it is getting really good

NTR should go and die in a ditch somewhere and save us the pain of reading it.
I would be glad if there was a tag for this kind of stuff in the site so people would be warned in advance without having to read reviews.

please upload a New chapter

The book is just too fascinating. I enjoyed your descriptions of each scene and unknowingly started picturing it. The way words were used was fascinating. I can only say that it is a piece of art.
A good job, author

Absolutely enticing and we'll written novel.

I love that there's no system or powerful drugs to unnaturally boast the MC. just some talent mixed with hardwork,a mature mind and past experiences. Can't wait to see his journey dealing with everything in his rise.

Absolutely love that his black just makes it more relatable. very curious if you'll tackle some of the problems "black athletes" come across in the sports world especially football ⚽️. And the pressure or lack of it some of the truly very top players face. eg messi,cr7,lebron,Tom Brady,pat mahomes,mbappe,Otani etc.

the pressure of winning individual trophies but not yet team success or vice versa.

Only wish their was more updates.

thanks for the beautiful story hopefully it's written to completion. I'll be here till it ends.