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I need to talk about the emotional payoff in these chapters because WOW. The scene where Chen Xi sets up that whole situation with Chen Hong and the second-rate guy - I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat. She heard their conversation, understood everything, and instead of confronting them directly, she decided to let karma do the work. That's not just smart, that's satisfying on a primal level. And then she just sat there eating melon seeds while watching the chaos unfold? The image of her casually snacking outside the door while people are screaming inside? I couldn't stop grinning. This is the kind of revenge scene that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside. But what really got me was the emotional journey Chen Xi is on. She's been through so much - betrayal by her family, losing her fiancé, being treated like garbage. And now she's not just surviving, she's thriving. She's got money, she's got powers, she's got a plan. The moment she found out about Uncle Chen's hidden savings - over ten thousand yuan! - and realized he was stingy with his own family? That anger was so valid. The fact that he wouldn't even lend his mother a penny but expected Chen Xi to send everything she earned? Unbelievable. And then the confrontation with Huang Jianguo - oh man. The way Chen Xi turned the tables on him, telling him about Chen Hong's affair, watching him scramble? Pure gold. She didn't just win, she made him lose everything in one conversation. The emotional high point for me was when Chen Xi kicked Chen Wei and sent him flying into her father and brother. The satisfaction of seeing the abusers finally get what they deserved? Chef's kiss.
just another Novel written by a brainless author with almost every single person I this book being brainless too ...
What can I say?... I found the book so interesting and easy to read!! The world-building is okay, same with the plot. The characters are okay too and the writing quality isn't bad.
this story is definitely worth the read. need i say more? you won't regret adding this to your reading list and giving this story a chance.author-nim! fighting!
I have to say that reading this brought a lot of nostalgia. It was only a few years ago that I've seen a the original charm of wuxia, xanxia, and all that.This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays.It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well.I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.
I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write.I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well.He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc.Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped?But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning.The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ...I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series:"Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot).This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand.Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist.The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere.The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life.In short, there are many errors of writing (not English).Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story).In short, I do not recommend the story.The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.
The m9st stupid novel so far many twist every where he go full of arrogance full of stupid plot just kill the MC Then revive hom again then kill him again then revive again then fin8sh this novel
I'm so proud of you mahallllll!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!! ily!!!!❤️❤️ I'm so proud of you mahallllll!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!! ily!!!!❤️❤️
I upvoted it because of the cover image for 2 weeks before reading the synopsis. God dammit. Now we have to wait another week for a good one