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首先，大家好，我可能會稍微劇透，所以如果不想被劇透的話，建議跳過這篇評論，謝謝。現在，對你說幾句話，作者。我真的非常喜歡你的網絡小說，對於一個開頭來說，有很多優點，但也有一些小缺點。先談談問題。其實唯一的問題就是你更新的不穩定性。你提到你正在經歷考試和假期的時期，所以我完全理解，但這也是我不能給你滿分的原因。我本來想說有時候翻譯有點問題，但這很可能是我的翻譯工具從英文到中文時翻譯不太準確的緣故。現在來談談優點，這些優點確實不少。首先，你的小說故事有一定的獨特性，並且在戰略方面有著重要的角色，我非常欣賞這一點！此外，角色數量不少，我希望今後會有越來越多的新角色出現。而且，我注意到一些伏筆，但我不會說出來，以免劇透（也因為如果猜錯了會很尷尬）。還有，城市以及世界的設定看起來非常周全，我也希望未來能繼續保持這樣的水準。總之，繼續說下去吧。我非常喜歡 Ume 這個角色，她的成長表現得很好。而且 Naboru 很快理解了自己的力量，我真的很喜歡！我甚至在想他是否故意輸掉比賽，讓 Ume 展示她的能力，哈哈！另外，Lysandros 似乎是一個非常出色的主角！好了，抱歉我寫得有點多了！未來我會繼續在其他章節留言，期待你能按照我所期望的那樣繼續發展你的小說！P.S. : 哦對了，拜託快換一下小說的封面吧！每次看到它我都差點以為點錯小說了，哈哈！我開玩笑的，其實封面挺符合故事的，不過我個人不是很喜歡。另外，我希望封面上能加上書名和作者名字，先謝謝啦!
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Honestly an amazing book written about kingdom building. It’s alot like World Online but a fair bit better. The overall writing quality is excellent you can tell the author has put effort into making it an enjoyable read. Also free chapters up to 94? Sign me up yes please. I have just caught up and am so excited for what’s going to happen next. I hope you never drop this and I for one would be glad to support ur writing
The book in general is very good that I’ll give a ?, but personally I seriously can’t stand the mc’s stupidity. It irritates me to no end. I don’t have anger issues. But I could seriously feel myself boil internally in vexation. I just can’t stand his idiocy, it’s not good for my mental health.
Amazing so far, hope it continues.The story is really well thought out with no plot holes, has an great story that's easy to follow and keeps you enthralled in the story
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Okay so, I am here for a review. To be honest, I am not into fantasy stuff, BUT, this novel is unique and amazing. I read some chapters and it piqued my interest right away. This novel has great potential ahead. Keep up the great work!!! upload more chapters, your readers wants more ?
The new chapters show a lot of potential. The occasional comedy bits make the story engaging, and the combination of pervy master-disciple makes it refreshing. Although this type of novel(male-female persona) is a bit hard to maintain consistency till the end, I hope the story maintains the quality till the end.
Well, tbh the storyline quite similiar to those romance r*pe and child novel, but this novel do not have r*pe.With only few chapter the author make me feels like in roller coaster. I don't like a painfull love story, and this story is a painfull one. But I choose to read because it has few chapter. It has a fluffy scene too, and.... Ehem... A hot scene too.I'm tired of those romance novel they said, but it full of face slaping, never ending white lotus. But the novel hardly make me feel like on roller coaster and satisfied.This novel have it all, an independent woman, white lotus, heart break, lovey dovey and I'm satisfied.Thanks for the novel~